Wow, this was a really good one, knew I was going into an abandoned/dead fic, but still, totally worth it. Great retelling of BTVS/Angel series and the Hellboy components fit in pretty much perfect. Hope to see this one continued eventually.
Only downside comment I have, and as it's been awhile since I read any Hellboy I don't remember the exact take they took, is that a few of the higher level aspects of the hierarchy in the pantheon I would have left a little more ambiguous. But, like I said, it's been awhile since I've read any Hellboy and I can't remember if the whole who begot who thing was laid out or not.
Story 9/10 (it's a really HIGH 9)
Potential 10/10
In Char 10/10 (Buffy is a total ** on wheels good intentioned or not lol.)
Grammar/Spelling 10/10

I have just recently come across this story, and spent the past two days reading it. I am amazed to have found such a wonderful and wonderous tale in this category. The characterization is amazing to see, and the story flows very smoothly. Your descriptions are very clear and concise, making it easy to picture everything.

All in all, I absolutely LOVE this story, and would like to see more of it. I understand how difficult life can be, though, as well as how finicky the Muses can be, so I shall await further chapters of this fantastic work in semi-patient anticipation. -TU

This is a great story. Please update soon.

Wow. This is good Hope to see it continued some day. Thanks for writing it though, bye for now.

Excellent story.

Slightly concerned there has no been an up-date recently at one stage it was going once a week. This is not a complaint i know how much real life & story blocks can interfere with stories. this is just encouragement.

So until the next time.

Owen

I admit I was skeptical for the first chapter as I haven't read too many Dawn-centric stories that I like. But I am happy to admit that I am pleasantly surprised with how this has turned out so far.

- Xander isn't just the handyman.
- Dawn is more than just a klepto teenager.
- Buffy isn't boinking spike and is this chemistry between her and Liz that I see?
- Fred proving the adage that "it's the quiet ones you need to watch for"
- Jonathan quoting Gandalf. Normally it'd just be geeky but the fact that he was standing up to a God, it easily qualifies as a Crowning Moment of Awesome.

Looking forward to the next chapter Mr. Caine.

Good chapter, and an interesting battle scene. Collateral damages from that fight should be an interesting problem for them and the BPRD to deal with. I enjoyed Dawn and Jonathan's date. Still looking forward to seeing more of Hellboy and Faith, naturally.

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Sigh.

I See the Willow things as as OOC as what Joss did, or even worse, as Willow, while loving to protect Tara, isn't a person that has this kind of reasoning (iirc, her wanting to dsestroy the earth was becasue she felt people's apin, and wanted to help them).

Still, i think that having her be afraid *could* be IC if you did it by threatening what was very important for Willow at that point: the person's appreciation fo willow.

Sounds like Fred might be staying and her parents too. Her folks are cool. I didn't see too much of the Angel series, but apparently Fred gets possessed by Illyria and pretty much devoured. Will that still happen, and how did the Prince fare against Hellboy and the gang?

So far so good. Love everything, even though it's about characters i could care more about. Now is going to be the difficult part, is it?

/me is afraid ^^

A True point about the scoobie, but one i tend to bend ^^

By "implosion", though i am wary ,as i really like some of them (wel, all of them), and truly hope yo uare not going to take revenge on what joss did with them or some such.

This is a truly kickass fic so far, and i would really hate to ahve to stop reading by "bashing". And for me, having a character turn stupid is bashing in most cases ^^.

/me Routs For Dawn to help out Willow XD.

First, are yo uaware you didn't enable anonymous review?

Second, good work. Am somewhat hoping there won't be Scooby abandonment.

Like this writing style a lot.

I was kind of waiting for the next chapter before reviewing, and then I started wondering if there's going to be a next chapter. ;)

Hellboy and Faith should prove interesting. Like the reviewer before I like the juxtaposition of various magic schools with each other. It'll be interesting to see what, if anything, develops between Dawn and Jonathan.

So, when's the the next chapter due?

Excellent story.

I have not found any really good Buffy/Hellboy crossovers, at least none that don't just stop when the author is really starting.

Not sure where you are taking Willow, it seems darker than the TV show ever did. So i will reserve judgement & hoppe you can bring her back.

By the way who are Ezekial & Sara they OC or borrowed from something.

& will Hellboy & Faith appear more.

So until you up-date more, i will be awaiting with bated breath.