 anon 11/23/10 . chapter 16 new borns dont giggle. they barely open their eat, sleep, poop, and cry. their cuteness doesnt start till at least 3 months. |
 Osiran Duelist 10/2/09 . chapter 26That was an awesome story! Please make a sequel! |
 Infernal Blossom 7/7/09 . chapter 26I have to say, this may have been the best Devil May Cry fanfiction I have ever read. You gave it such good detail, and there was a uniqueness to it that really caught my attention. |
 SniperXkitty 3/16/09 . chapter 26AH! lol are you planing on making a sequel? it was really good i loved it! please make a sequel. *puppy eyes* |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/26/08 . chapter 26Hahaha! I loved this chapter. And now she is pregnant! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
Grimmy |
 Io Ritorne 10/25/08 . chapter 26NOT AGAIN xD
omg, they've changed the box thingy for reviewing.
i like this one better 8D |
 Dante's blade 10/25/08 . chapter 26U pregnant huh this shall be interesting please update! XD |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/21/08 . chapter 25Great chapter! The one thing i want to know is...WHERE THE HELL IS DANTE? I mean after all its his family...Just wondering.
Grimmy |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/13/08 . chapter 24Great chapter! That's cool, Dante can fly! Haha!
Grimmy |
 Eric Draven201 10/12/08 . chapter 24Awesome chapter! |
 Devil Rebel 10/9/08 . chapter 23keep it up |
 Eric Draven201 9/28/08 . chapter 23Great chapter... it seems like he has some choices to make, Save the twins or his woman. |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 9/28/08 . chapter 23I loved it! But i hope that they all survive.
Grimmy |
 The Dying Breed 9/27/08 . chapter 1Dear god, woman. Work on your grammar. D:
First and foremost, the punctuation. You used, "were" instead of "We're." It's really a frustrating read, since the plot sounds intriguing. But I just can't get passed this part.
There's many places where you could've used a comma, yet you didn't. Really disappointing.
-Kyoshi |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 9/26/08 . chapter 22I love it! I feel bad for her sister though.
Grimmy |