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anon 11/23/10 . chapter 16
new borns dont giggle. they barely open their eat, sleep, poop, and cry. their cuteness doesnt start till at least 3 months.
Osiran Duelist 10/2/09 . chapter 26
That was an awesome story! Please make a sequel!
Infernal Blossom 7/7/09 . chapter 26
I have to say, this may have been the best Devil May Cry fanfiction I have ever read. You gave it such good detail, and there was a uniqueness to it that really caught my attention.
SniperXkitty 3/16/09 . chapter 26
AH! lol are you planing on making a sequel? it was really good i loved it! please make a sequel. *puppy eyes*
Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/26/08 . chapter 26
Hahaha! I loved this chapter. And now she is pregnant! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!

Grimmy
Io Ritorne 10/25/08 . chapter 26
NOT AGAIN xD

omg, they've changed the box thingy for reviewing.

i like this one better 8D
Dante's blade 10/25/08 . chapter 26
U pregnant huh this shall be interesting please update! XD
Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/21/08 . chapter 25
Great chapter! The one thing i want to know is...WHERE THE HELL IS DANTE? I mean after all its his family...Just wondering.

Grimmy
Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 10/13/08 . chapter 24
Great chapter! That's cool, Dante can fly! Haha!

Grimmy
Eric Draven201 10/12/08 . chapter 24
Awesome chapter!
Devil Rebel 10/9/08 . chapter 23
keep it up
Eric Draven201 9/28/08 . chapter 23
Great chapter... it seems like he has some choices to make, Save the twins or his woman.
Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 9/28/08 . chapter 23
I loved it! But i hope that they all survive.

Grimmy
The Dying Breed 9/27/08 . chapter 1
Dear god, woman. Work on your grammar. D:

First and foremost, the punctuation. You used, "were" instead of "We're." It's really a frustrating read, since the plot sounds intriguing. But I just can't get passed this part.

There's many places where you could've used a comma, yet you didn't. Really disappointing.

-Kyoshi
Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 9/26/08 . chapter 22
I love it! I feel bad for her sister though.

Grimmy
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