I love these! I'm looking forward to more. =]

iLOVE ITT

:) loved this, excited for more!

A nice update, well written. Keep up the great work x

:)

update again please

i really, really, really love this.
even though i read part of midnight sun, this was written just a beautifully.
edward was just so in character, and your writing was beautiful.
i think you should continue- and put scenes that was not in midnight sun.
=]
i loveed this!

nice job... looking forward to more!

oh excellent. i cant wait to see what scene you'll write next.

please update soon :)

i love the way you described how edward picks up thoughts in the form of complicated colors and symbols, as opposed to the italic phrases most writers use to mark someone's else's thoughts in edward's head, because ppl most certainly do not always think in coherant sentances.

can't wait for the next update =]. keep it up ^^.

It's great to see you writing again! You lend Edward exactly the voice I expect, and I can't wait to see what you get out next!

LD. x

Absolutely amazing!! You really tapped into Edward's character perfectly!! Now I really can't wait to read Midnight Sun and see how close you get to Stephenie's Edward!!

That was amazing!