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Reviews for: Indisposed
Chromde
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
Haha, loved it. The humour was spot-on perfect. And even though I'm not a Nejishika fan, I feel like I just might read Kindred in the near future because I lOVE your writing style.
Lightly
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Great1 Ecpessially the phrase about long hair. Incredible to read the thoughts, looks like Neji thinks himself - really amasing! Had fun while reading - thanks a lot. There are MANY thinhs during the story which I liked. "Charming" - for ex, I liked the irony. I liked how smug Neji was, just great! I read The Kindred aleady. Thanks for fun!
cha-11-Erise
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
loved your story!

“And you smell faintly of coconut.”

I thought I washed that off! Gods that stuff is like permanent ink! Wait a second—

-this part cracked me up real good! too bad it ended right away. :D anyway, great work. i hope you keep it up. :)
Lover of Brownies
2008-12-08 . chapter 1
Back again to make my ammends! XD

When I first read this, I swear I was grinning like a fool! XD Neji, you ARE the man! The inner dialouge was perfect! It gave you a sense that Neji really is just a regular person, but knows exactly what and how to say things infront of certain people. Just like a Hyuga's supposed to. Cause really, 'fu**ed him into a coma' should REALLY stay in your head. (even if it's so very, very true :D)

Thanks for the extra that gives the fans of this fic who were wondering 'but what about work life?' a bit of closure with that yummy dose of Neji humour.

Peace out...
Rosa Lui
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
XD I love it! And... surprisingly in character, for Neji!
toto-chan
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
I absolutely enjoy your stories. Read Kindred from start to finish and laughed out lousd repeatedly. Moreover, I loved your characterizations of Neji and Shikamaru. I'm going to friend you. I need more of your special type of humor! I'm going to friend you in LJ, no doubt! You're the man.
sumisweet
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
lol.. I love this sequel(?). Just finished Kindred and woah...I think my brain is half dead. The sexual intensity and the climax of the first night blew me away. Everything felt so raw and powerful. Just love it!

Can't wait for more fics from you. ^^
LaFiammaNera
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
This was great! I'm a fan of "Kindred" so this was a great peek into the next day/morning without ruining the main plot. Now you can again focus on Neji & Shika since we already know about this outside aspect!! Great job!
Peace-Love-Yaoi
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
HAHAHA! I have to say, I love Kakashi! I am so sad, this is the story I looked forward to most. I guess I will just have to wait for the next story you come out with. Can't wait!
headraline
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
I guess Kakashi can't really be anything that awesome X°D

Neji's line of thought is priceless!
Sanee
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Another excellent read. I love the dry humor you used throughout this and Kindred.
Youkofox
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
And Neji didn't say a word during the entire interrogation, yet he was still cornered. I loved his thoughts through the whole thing, and the entire scene was awesome. The bit at the end was a bonus xDD

Good job, and congratulations on finishing the fic.
Neko Raiga
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
GOD, you had me grinning like a fool all throughout the chapter! XD
And the last part..."told you not to let his long hair fool you" SERIOUSLY cracked me up!
Nice X3
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