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MailxJeevasxFTW 4/9/12 . chapter 1
Oh i lol'd at this. Loved it!
MasterOfGrey 2/10/12 . chapter 1
This is something else, after Kindred this is just beautifully hilarious. Made my day. :D
WatchingAsYouFall 12/1/11 . chapter 1
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before but if not, it begs the question why? I love this story and if I ever need a quick pick-me-up this is the fic I come to.

WatchingAsYouFall
Tainara Black 10/20/11 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAAH KAKASHI (L) YOU GORGEOUS THING!

I've enjoyed it SO F*CKING MUCH! kakashi it PERFECT! love it! and the bet? OMG ahahahaha you got me!

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tai xxxxxx
Kaishka 2/22/11 . chapter 1
lol I'm glad this was done because I wondered what they talked about!

best lines ever;

it doesn't make a difference to me if you two plow it on a trapeze swinging from the rafters after you leave here every night from now on.

I almost cried laughing

when you wipe your ass it's news

I woke my dad up

and of course Neji's constant "I'm the man" this is so comical. I LOVE your stories!
Eru no Tsubasa 1/21/11 . chapter 1
Ha! That was totally awesome! XD Loved the remark about Neji's hair... XD

Eru-chan
Squeakyai 9/7/10 . chapter 1
they WOULD make a bet XD
niver 2/3/09 . chapter 1
Haha, loved it. The humour was spot-on perfect. And even though I'm not a Nejishika fan, I feel like I just might read Kindred in the near future because I lOVE your writing style.
7troublesome 1/12/09 . chapter 1
Great1 Ecpessially the phrase about long hair. Incredible to read the thoughts, looks like Neji thinks himself - really amasing! Had fun while reading - thanks a lot. There are MANY thinhs during the story which I liked. "Charming" - for ex, I liked the irony. I liked how smug Neji was, just great! I read The Kindred aleady. Thanks for fun!
capricious insanity 12/29/08 . chapter 1
loved your story!

“And you smell faintly of coconut.”

I thought I washed that off! Gods that stuff is like permanent ink! Wait a second—

-this part cracked me up real good! too bad it ended right away. :D anyway, great work. i hope you keep it up. :)
Lover of Brownies 12/8/08 . chapter 1
Back again to make my ammends! XD

When I first read this, I swear I was grinning like a fool! XD Neji, you ARE the man! The inner dialouge was perfect! It gave you a sense that Neji really is just a regular person, but knows exactly what and how to say things infront of certain people. Just like a Hyuga's supposed to. Cause really, 'fu**ed him into a coma' should REALLY stay in your head. (even if it's so very, very true :D)

Thanks for the extra that gives the fans of this fic who were wondering 'but what about work life?' a bit of closure with that yummy dose of Neji humour.

Peace out...
Rosa Lui 9/21/08 . chapter 1
XD I love it! And... surprisingly in character, for Neji!
toto-chan 9/15/08 . chapter 1
I absolutely enjoy your stories. Read Kindred from start to finish and laughed out lousd repeatedly. Moreover, I loved your characterizations of Neji and Shikamaru. I'm going to friend you. I need more of your special type of humor! I'm going to friend you in LJ, no doubt! You're the man.
sumisweet 9/7/08 . chapter 1
lol.. I love this sequel(?). Just finished Kindred and woah...I think my brain is half dead. The sexual intensity and the climax of the first night blew me away. Everything felt so raw and powerful. Just love it!

Can't wait for more fics from you.
LaFiammaNera 8/30/08 . chapter 1
This was great! I'm a fan of "Kindred" so this was a great peek into the next day/morning without ruining the main plot. Now you can again focus on Neji & Shika since we already know about this outside aspect! Great job!
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