wow, i loved it.

at first i thought there was only 1 chapter but i was soo glad to see a second one! =)

the story was really well written

Great story, nice touch with the brother. lol So, what did he really do to Joe? lol

I thought it was a cute story but the only thing is Ecstacy (MDMA) doesn't have the capacity to cause memory loss/amnesia even temporarily. Perhaps a better choice would have been GHB or Rohypnol (Roofies). Which are the more commonly used drugs for date rape, as they are capable of causing a total loss of consciousness. But it was still a cute story.

Aw! I love happy endings! that waas such a great story. Can't wait for more from you! x

Great story!

Great story - short and to the point! Wow! That's an oldie but a goodie! I remember the Grassroots!

Great story. It was very well written. Each of your own characters has a personality, which was good. I hope you write more Flack/Angell :D

Great chapter, and a great conclusion! Thank you for updating, and I'm so glad that Angell was okay, and Flack was there for her :) Loved action and angry Flack, and the chase of the cab, coud picture him exactly. I also really liked your own characters - Missy and the cab driver, they came over really strongly. Joe too, deeply unpleasant as he was, was very well written. Loved too the little revelation it led to, and how Angell reacted to things the next morning, and finding Don there Please write more soon!

well you got me interested, and then you quit writing , guess i'll have to wait for the update.

Yay! I cannot get enough of Flack/Angell. I love it!

Gotta love the suspense! Great story, keep 'er flowin... :D

Great opening! But oh dear, poor Angell, you have to update very soon! I love the Flack/Angell aspect of the story, and was very glad when Flack showed up, and also the character of Missy. Joe though, he's horrible, and I do hope that Flack's able to get to Angell before anything bad happens to her. The situation was also very well written, things going wrong so easily...

gah! that was so good! i wanna know what happens! update soon! xx

Good to see a new Flack/Angell story :) but bit of a cliff-hanger ending there! first of all, you have to update soon. This was very tense, and I'm very worried for Angell, being caught out, and it shows how easy it is for that happen. You wrote it very plausibly, without Angell appearing a weak character at all. I liked the character of her friend Missy too, trying to look out for her. I'm really glad Don appeared, and I loved his feelings at the beginning - disappointed, but not wanting to show it. Joe is a really nasty character, and I hope Angell is also able to get herself out of trouble, with maybe a litle help from Don. Update soon!

Sounds really interesting so far! I can't wait for an update :)