 CottonCandyHaze 2009-08-13 . chapter 1._.
I seriously hate you right now ;>w>
I wasn't supposed to enjoy my little Dasiuke getting raped by that fag Krad ;>>
Yes I hate Krad ._. I never once found him sexy ;>> He just pisses me off to no end...
DARK on the other hand.. *shudder*
But!
Moving along!
I loved it =w=
I think it was the pure, raw sex that happened and Krad's mood swings, which I actually expected ._.
I liked it, and, dare I say it, look forward to another one of these from you ;>w>
Oh dear.. I've become a COMPLETE pervert if I've touched D N Angel >ww>
Oh! man I just discovered what the 'D' and 'N' can stand for ._. And the Angel!
Oh dude I'm a genious >w<
But anyway, keep up the nice work! |
 My Luvly Riku 2008-12-10 . chapter 1Wow, this is a wonderfully beautiful story, though dark, I love it! |
 death by computer addiction 2008-12-08 . chapter 1:D OH MY FREAKING GWAD!! I so saw the title for this and neary woke up the house yelling 'LUDO!' All my other friends think their creepy T-T but you under staand |
 EvilAngelofHeavenandHell 2008-09-25 . chapter 1I LOVE KRADAISUKE!
THIS WAS LONG BUT GOOD!
CONGRAD -U -FUCKIN -LATIONS IT ACTUALLY GOES ON MY FAVS LIST! |
 CelloSolo2007 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Awesome fic. I love it when Krad's so sadistic like that, it's so perfect. That's the best part of this pair, he can torture Dai all he wants without much of a fight. I do like the twist in this, how Dai wasn't actually reluctant. Nice job with this, Krad was described quite well. Keep it up!
~Sapphire |
 WhiteWings9 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Wowza! What a lovely find, topping the KradDai search results (was looking out for competition, hehe).
Okay, I'll be frank and say that I loved some bits and absolutely hated other bits.
Let's get the hated bits over with first - the fact that you had Krad automatically reach for a knife. It's terribly cliche, and although he didn't use it, you still put a mention, and I didn't like that. To me Krad doesn't appeal to bodily harm as a means of breaking a person, and I'm glad that's the theme you stuck with in the end.
Next, the epilogue. Dark's part was way too OOC for my liking. Just the language you used, I think. You write beautifully, but it just doesn't fit Dark's personality. At times I thought you nailed it, eg. 'Heheh. Good morning, Commander, you fucking bastard.' Then you wrote 'I personally...' and ruined it. It was just too eloquent for his personality.
Now for the bits I loved - breaking out of the usual rape scenario so predominant in this pairing. Okay, so it was only semi-consensual. But I loved how you had Daisuke fight back and show that he wasn't weak. Good job with the flashback of the strangle scene in vol4.
And just about every delicious description. If you're writing another fic, please keep up your lovely descriptions, and write more of it! It gave me goosebumps, I was practically drowning in my own 'carnal desire', hehehe... |
 forbalathegreen 2008-09-03 . chapter 1*flowerflower* !pretty! *flowerflower* |
 iKat.13 2008-09-01 . chapter 1This is quite possibly my favorite Krad/Dai fic ever. Most of them have Daisuke be crying the entire time, Krad being the usualy bastard he is, cutting him up and stuff. This was more in character, at least in my opinion. People never make Daisuke very resistant, or they make him very weak, which he's not.
Is it strange that I found some of this amusing? I think I have a very dark and strange sense of humor... |
 L'uke-chan 2008-08-30 . chapter 1Wow.. That was... like..am..how can I say it? heh... Like.. like.. AWESOME! Totally brilliant^^.
I luv Krad/Dai, I'm not a fan of Sato/Dai, but meh! Anyway^^. I researched the song... Y'know what? It was BLOODY HARD to find. Found it..eventually ~.~.. pretty good^^, expected something more heavy with such lyrics x]] but still good. heheh..
Ok. AMAZING fic as always! The end was a bit weird >.>; but other than that, Brilliant. |
 Mystik Genie 2008-08-29 . chapter 1man that was amazing! and that song is so awesome! i love it! great choice, its so creepy soft, lol
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