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| BizzyLizzy 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, I love the way Daniel feels so guilty for defending himself. |
| Lexandria 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it, good plot and everyting. only it seemed a little short, but when I like a fan fic, even if it has 15 chapters, I still think it's to short so.. ^_^ it's not to short, just only to me I guess! 'cuz I liked it so much!! keep wrighting, you're a good author! |
| Cestershire 2002-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting... this fic has a lot of potential for TBC, and I am frankly eager to see it continued! Please go on ... PLEASE !!! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS GREAT STORY !!! |
| Femtastic34 2001-12-03 ch 1, | abuseEnjoyed the story. Just love that Daniel got his own back for once. Go Space Monkey! |
| miscbills 2001-11-15 ch 1, | abuseJust read the story again. Still made chuckle. Jack acting like a proud big brother or dad over Daniel beating two thugs. Than light teasing over it. He going to after random strangers to relive stress. |
| J. 2001-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, so I am a total pyscho! This is the second time I have read the story, and the second time is much better than the first.I love it! I'm thinking about making it one of my more visited sites...Thanks |
| geraldine 2001-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseok, this is the first review i post, and i live in belgium, so i'm not so sure about my english...sorry if i make mistakes. anyway, i loved this story. it was nice to "see" daniel defend himself after all these fan fics where he needs rescuing. i mean, i never really understtod why so many people seem to think he is incapable of defending himself; even in the tv show, he did hold his own against baddies. well, once or twice. anyway, i had a good time reading that story, so thank you for writing it. |
| Jennie 2001-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THAT ONE! I LOVE THE FACT THAT SOMEONE IS GETTING CLUED INTO DANIEL FIGHTING BACK! PLEASE...PLEASE....PLEASE WRITE MORE OKAY! |
| miscbills 2001-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like that! Danny won a fight. And 2 to 1. And it just like Danny to feel quilty about it. Glad Jack is there to wise him up. |
| Soul Refrain 2001-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThaat was cute, and even better Daniel got a good part. (Purrs contentedly) :) |
| Coke (not signed in) 2001-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so cute! Go Daniel!! (makes whooping noises) |
| Katherine4 2001-11-12 ch 1, | abuse*yay* Daniel won! so cute:) |
| Kat 2001-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! It was really touching! |