Awesome Dudley story. The "friendly" interaction between Harry and Dudley is one that I wish JKR explored more in the last book. I really liked the POV that you took!! Keep up the good work. :)

I really liked the story. As you said it was short but, it had a lot in it and kept me interested which is more then I can say for most.

WOW... Dudley D. / Susan B. It is in my option one of the best pairings that i have read. Great twists to boot. thanks for writing this fanfic and keep up the good work. :)

Good chapter. Good story do far.

Woot! He had met Harry's godson and one of his friends!

He needs to leave. Dudley needs to get more education as well.

Oh dear. Do a sequel. Can you do a story where Harry is a girl and Draco is a veela and she ends up finding out that they are mates?

love it!! poor dudley just got the whole pregnant again thrown at him =D

lovely story.one of the best dudley stories i have ever read.

PERFECT ENDING!!

My heart gave a little lurch when I read:

1.There was nothing worse than standing outside at seven in the morning, wearing black, as his daughter

I was thinking NO! And then I finished the sentence and was thinking, "Phew THANK GOD!"

2.“I was thinkin' about getting the hose and flooding the Potter's garden.” said Dudley.
“I will put your car in a tree!” was a faceless retaliation from somewhere near the fence.

-dies of laughter- OH MY GOODNESS! That was great! Best line EVER! And then the end with her being pregnant again, this time with a baby boy.

PERFECT!!

Very good story, with a nice plot. Also good to read about the not-so-popular characters, and in a positive light! You hade quite a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, very well written!

cute ending.

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Awesome ending to awesome story!

Aw... I liked this fic, but that was such an abrupt ending...