lol I love the ending...soo funny :)

that was awesome i loved it

it was so cute perfection

simply amazing

it was pretty damn funny to lol

anyways i loved it your awesome

A great piece of work. It is nice to read a light-hearted story and good to laugh. Poor Edward - suffering again!

Bahahahahaha loverly. Robert. "Honestly, you eat him, and you are a dead man, Edward." I loled. You're such a great writer, Nat! *is jealous of you, but still loves you anyway*

But he's already dead! Lol, I liked this a lot.

thats fantastic. This is creepy cause I was totally thinking about doing a story where Bella brings home some sort of puppy and Edward has to resist it...very well done! I loved the last line especially. Keep up the great work!

hahahah.

i laughed out loud at the last line.

OMG this is some of the best stuff I’ve read in a while plz you gotta update. I’m serious this is just awesome. Feel free to check out my fics anyone you want but please drop something for me so I can improve my skills and hopefully be as good as you are.

And plz review my stories The Fourth Son and Blood Ties Those are my current ones and i would really appreciate it

THANX

L8R DAYZ