... I cannot stop the tears that are running down my face... That was amazing. It really was.

AWW! I loved it! I had tears in my eyes and I was like "must stay strong!" Lol. I love how you wrote Hikaru, he was so sweet and loving. w It was a beautiful and powerful story with lots of emotion. Awesome job!

oh god...that was really something...oh lord. oh my! breathe. u cnt believe it! i love this...it makes me cry...oh god...i cnt really say anything but...i am so touched by this story. one of a kind...really...one of a kind. you have great writing skills...you bring me to a world where the story is the only thing that exists. you are a great writer...oh god.. i love the story.

i...d-don't know what to say!

good and bad?

lol. it's bad. in a good way...?

heh. but in the anime, haruhi should be with hikaru!:P

sequel? lots and lots of drama! hahahaha

it's a nice story.

I loved it!

Although I am a huge Haruhi and Hikaru fan this was majorly good!

I commend u for such great work.

Even brought a small tear to my eye :)

I'd like to read more Haruhi and Hikaru oneshots of ur's if you dicide to write some.

Maybe one w/ a happy ending? -

Anyways great job!

Wow, that story had a lot of emotion. Nice writing :)

I'm back!

hahaha! I really can't get enough of it...

you can make a Haruhi version of this one... on her point of view... and then make a sequel! hahaha!

just like what everyone is saying...

since it's a nice story...

oh yeah... I posted this story on my blog... if that's alright with you... just tell me if you want me to remove it...

oh my gosh! thanks for this! I love it...

the ending made me cry... but I can't cry here in the computer shop...

my tears wanted to escape from my eyes but I can't let that happen... XD

while I was reading it... I was smiling... why? because I was so happy that someone made me a story... I've been wanting to read something off from Ne-Yo's Go On Girl...

I love it Zen-chan! thanks very much!

I'll read it again later when I have an internet connection at home...

thanks very much! I love you for this!

you really made my day...

the story is so sad... T_T

Aww, that was a nice story. Did you intend for it to be AU? It's a pretty interesting view of what Hikaru can feel. Anyways, maybe you can continue on with this plot. It's really catching.. like place it in Haruhi's point of view next! :D

Haruhi is truly a bitch...and Hikaru is too kind...I just wish that she din't cheat on him with Tamaki...

Great job with Hikaru's point of view. Very well done.

I'm so depressed. That was so sad! I'm so scared that the creators are really going to have her end up with Tamaki when she should so be with Hikaru. Your story just convinced me of how depressed I'll be if and when that does happen. (sigh) It's not fair! Hikaru needs someone to love him (besides Kaoru)! Any chance of a continuance where Haruhi realizes the error of her ways?

OMG, that was excellent! I loved it!