what the hell

i have a down right hero worship of kakashi

but that is no why this awesome writting has disappointed me

extremely

okay so kakashi like a baka leaves iruka after their first night together BECAUSE HE THOUGHT HE HURT HIM (RAPE/TAKEN ADVANTAGE)

BUT he didnt

so why did kakashi had to suffer so fucking much in this fic

how could iruka and the whole fucking village get it so wrong

kakashi disfigure

being a shanobi is his life

you practically mad e hima a dead thing that just jumps at the opportunity to be punished by iruka.

my god that was a brutal punishment. so unfair.

i think someone else said this but i have to say it again

do you like kakashi?

your writing was great i would still read anything you write

you are very talent

but this story line was bias and unjust.

ta you for your hard work.

I really wanted to like this story. It was well written and had some good action. But, in the end, I couldn't. You made Iruka darn near a saint, and blamed everything on Kakashi to the point that he thinks he deserves to be maimed for the rest of his life. Sorry, but just because Kakashi left him after sleeping with him, that is no reason for Iruka to have been 'so incredibly hurt' that he basically threw a fit and destroyed the man he loved. It was also no reason for everyone that was supposedly Kakashi's friend to despise him like he was a pariah - not without hearing both sides of the story. Iruka was just as in the wrong. He was hurt because Kakashi didn't trust him? Well, what about Kakashi? After all, Iruka refused to tell Kakashi what he was. That nonsense about slowly, eventually telling him - sounds like someone wanting their cake and eating it too. Kakashi must trust Iruka or it's the ultimate betrayal, but it's ok if Iruka doesn't trust Kakashi with his secret. That makes no sense. And everyone hating on Kakashi for this ultimate betrayal, but seeing nothing wrong with all the things Iruka did - instead, seeing him as the best of them all that needs to be protected from the insensitive, vile Kakashi at all costs. No, that makes no sense either. In the end, it didn't seem that Iruka was as upset as he should be over the damage he caused, allowing Kakashi to be a martyr with his seemingly permanent physical disabilities and Kakashi's destructive opinion of himself that he deserved his disabilities as a reminder of all the emotional hurt he caused. In fact, it didn't seem like Iruka truly loved Kakashi - after all, it took hurting his 'son' Naruto for Iruka to start regaining his humanity, when it should have started after seeing the massive amount of damage and near death of the jounin he supposedly loved with all his being.

The emotional hurt of Kakashi leaving right after sex to go to the memorial and angst over 'taking advantage of Iruka' (who seemed to want to be taken advantage of anyway) was, in my opinion, far less than the punishment handed out to poor Kakashi by everyone (and especially the punishment handed out by Iruka). What Kakashi was put through, both emotionally and physically, was blatantly unfair and outright cruel compared to his insensitive act (which he only committed because of his twisted logic regarding protecting Iruka).

I don't know if you ever plan to revisit this story for another sequel, but if you do, you should consider exploring the other side of that coin more - have people see that Iruka was wrong, make him feel guilt for what he did and seek forgiveness himself (and strive to insure he never loses that kind of control again), and not keep verbally (and physically) bashing on Kakashi. It's about time Kakashi got some apologies from everyone for all their parts in this whole fiasco. And Iruka should heal Kakashi back to his former physical self, since Iruka stated he could do so before he allowed Kakashi to sacrificially refuse on the grounds Kakashi needed 'to be reminded of all the emotional hurt he caused'. Kakashi's life is as a shinobi. He would waste away if he could no longer be a shinobi, as is currently the case. And now he is also defenseless from those enemies who would harm the great Copy Cat nin for revenge or glory.

You are a good writer (other than those strange A/N inserts in the middle of scenes that would throw me temporarily out of the story mindset), so I hope you do continue writing Kakashi/Iruka, and maybe more to this story. But do try not to be so biased for one over the other. Just from reading 'Underneath the Scars' and 'Scars Fade', if it wasn't for you stating that you are a Kakashi/Iruka fan, I would have sworn you despised Kakashi with a passion.

so awesome

ZOMG! I love love love this story! Sniff sniff. I can't believe its over! pouts why couldn't it have continued forever? I'm so sad now. Thankyou for such a wonderful story! I'm off to read more of your stories! Please don't stop. puppy dog eyes

That. Was. Lovely. *gazes down at the pool of blood* Yup. Lovely.

What. The. Hell. Just. Happened. *MINDFUCK*

WOW! This is just beautiful! BUt my heart just broke for Kakashi and Iruka, although mostly for Kakashi. It seems like no one was on Kakashi's side except for Gaara and his siblings. They know why Kakashi did what he did but few understands Kakashi.

Just love the ending! how you beuatifuly wrapped things up between Kakashi and Iruka. Although during Iruka fights between Neji, Shikamura, Gaara, and Naruto; i kept picturing Kakashi putting himself in front of Iruka to protect him from them. But that didn't happen. Guess, Kakashi was just too hurt to do anything. Although Kakashi was pretty impressive at the end of the fight when Kakashi just gazed at Iruka since Kakashi was pretty much out of it!

hahaha. I just love how those four preverts were looking into Kakashi adn Iruka moment. Although i can't blame them too much. Heck, given a chance, i would be right with them too. _ And i am happy that Kakashi will not have an imprefect face. Because damn, Kakashi is just too hot. I am sure that Kakashi doesn't care about his face, but i am still happy that he let Iruka healed him. And now everythign is even better than before.

Again i just love it! A very emotional and beautiful story! Love it! Adore it!

Wow. Poor Kakashi and Iruka. Would have loved to see the reactions to a compleltly healed Kakashi. Glad seeing Naruto bleeding managed to shock Iruka back to himself. And that his students fought to bring him back to himself. Loved the way Iruke healed Kakashi...would there be any side effects from it? If Kakashi's chakra was gone or whatever would the Sharingan have still worked?

Wow. I'd like to say that I enjoyed this, but I really, really didn't. By the end it read like domestic abuse, especially when Kakashi said he deserved what Iruka did, and it wouldn't matter if Iruka did it again. And why? Because Kakashi is insensitive? I can't even understand why you would write something like that. Love doesn't fix everything, and an old wrong doesn't make a new wrong right.

I only finished reading because I was hoping that you would redeem the story by letting Kakashi get over Iruka and leave him. I didn't want them to get together because I was completely convinced that any future relationship would be abusive.

I'm sorry. I guess you've just made me kind of nauseous. And sad. I mean, I like Kakashi, and I get the feeling that you do too, so why did he have to suffer so much to be 'worthy' of Iruka? Why did you have Iruka's trespasses be forgiven like they meant nothing? The harm he did was malicious, and saying that Iruka couldn't control himself is what every single beaten and abused woman or man out there says. It's okay because he loves Kakashi? It's okay because Kakashi hurt him first? Iruka didn't even seem to regret it that much!

Seriously, by the end of this, I wanted Iruka to die and I wanted Kakashi to refuse to be in a relationship with him out of sheer self preservation. Not necessarily in the same plotline.

Anyway, I guess I should finish off with something positive. Your writing has improved immensely since the prequel. And I'm really sorry, but your plot HORRIFIED me.

I"M SO SORRY ONEE-SAMA! I never should have doubted your mad skilz! *bows so quickly she smacks her head on the floor.

I love the ending of the story and welll

YOU ARE A GENIUS!

i know i had already reviewed the last chaper and co im doing it again... hehehe ;

i just had to because i read your reply today and felt bad all over again.

Love and cookies,

Enna

PS get your butt moving on another irukaka kudasai!

PPS *kakashi: CHATTA MATTE! don't i have any say in this?

*Dragonflowers: Nope...

Onee-san!

that was the best ending you could have written!

Ok Onee-san, Please don't feel bad about this rant because i love your writing and the story. Truly.

WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO KAKASHI-ONII-CHAN! HE WAS SO PREFECT BEFROEEEEEEE *wails incoherently* I know that he is a terribly terribly damaged silver-haired pervert but her deserves to be cuddled and fucked into a wall not sunburned to the point of poisoning and erased from Iruka-chans memory! He doesn't even 'Maa..' anymore! Why did you do that to him! and why did you tan him so much! People with super pale skin (like me) are sex-gods or goddesses (which ever gender persuasion you are...) He doesn't read Icha Icha he doesn't stare at Tsuade's boobs any more and he works hard!

*ahem* I know that you will (eventually) get the fated boys together- *momentarily passes out from massive nosebleed* Well shid that blood id goin to be hard to ged oud... Because you are the best writer of smut with plot i have ever read! Keep going k?

Love and massive nosebleeds,

Dragonflowers

Hehehe Cheat proof straws... The Sandaime Seems smarter than they depict him... Still can't beat that sexy no jutsu...

Done! I said a couple of days, what was I thinking? I finished it in one day! And that means I'm also reviewer number 201! I don't know why I'm excited about that, but anyway!

THIS WAS AWESOME! Seriously, the best KakaIru story I have EVER read! God, it was great! I just don't like the idea of Kakashi being a civilian. It's strange to picture him doing simple, mundane activities... Weird

Vithian

Gah! Review 200! Soooo excited! Anyway, I'll review again at the end, I just wanted to say how I much I love this story, and am glad you didn't leave it where you did! The next couple of days will be devoted to reading your story. Feel special.

Vithian