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TopBanana
2009-10-18 . chapter 11
i just started reading this story tonight, i couldn´t stop just kept going, and got very excited when you said you had already finished the last chapters, then surely I could read how it ends. but the all of a sudden and without warning the story stops. I checked when it was last updated and it has been 2 months!! If you have already written the final chapters it can´t be too much trouble posting them for your anxious readers? Please.
Elizabeth Perry
2009-10-18 . chapter 11
When do we get more?
SMACkedHuddy
2009-09-15 . chapter 11
This is really full of suspense, I love it! Please continue soon.
sparkygirl82
2009-09-14 . chapter 11
Wow, just re-read this chapter again. Such a great story! I hope you update soon. I'm curious so see how everything's connected, and hopefully they'll find Stella soon!
hope4sall
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
Very nice - I really like how you show Gina's nerves here about calling the police. I can imagine that would be how she feels. Nice job!
hope4sall
2009-08-16 . chapter 10
I like that Mac knows he needs to remember something! I like what you're doing with this - I am very curious to learn why Stella can't see. This is a great story!
lily moonlight
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
Sorry this is a little late, weddings got in the way, and some reckless driving up the motorway XD Still, at last i haven't got anyone locked in a cellar, not like the very bad guy who has poor Stella locked away :( I dislike him even more after this chapter, even though we didn't see him, his presence was there. He's the quiet sort of evil which is most frightening, and the psychological torment is very scary. You're scarily good at writing that :O
I loved this chapter, as you know, and liked all the different scenes; good to see gina again, you've made her a really rounded, and important character. i'm very glad she decides at the end to make the call. That was a nice detail about her thinking of her family, and Stella reminding her of her older sister.
I loved the little bit with Adam as well - it must have taken a lot of his courage to interrupt Mac and Don and say his piece, with the startling information he had to give as well. Loved the description of him tripping over his words. Poor Mac, now even more confused, and it's now even more important for him to remember. I can really feel his frustration with how you write him here.
Really liked Don's calm demeanour in 'counterpoint' to Mac's desperation, i could picture him in his movements, and then the hand smacking on the desk like a gun shot. Fantastic! Really can't wait for your update! But then you know that too :P
BlueEyedAuthor
2009-08-13 . chapter 11
i loved those last 2 chapters! update soon!
afrozenheart412
2009-08-13 . chapter 11
YES! Rock on! Stella is one step closer to being found. You really nailed your description of Adam and his OCD. But it was the venom that he injected into his voice. You don't get to see angry or upset Adam very much but when you do...look out. Especially toward the people who hurts his loved ones. And the way you are connecting the dots with Mac being at Stella's place and meeting Sean for the first time, is amazing.

I understand that Mac is upset because he doesn't know what is happening to Stella or what is going on, but if he wants to remember he has to calm down. Getting upset is not helping her, nor the situation. I wonder why Gina's parents don't want her to know the police? I mean they are there to help people in trouble. It is another mystery we have to solve, right? :) I was wondering how you would work in Reed's blog. Awesome chapter! I'm glad that Gina is doing the right thing.
Nucleus Xtreme
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
Once again, good chapter! Great job keeping the suspense in the chapters! You're leaving me on the edge of the seat, I was clutching my pillow! Great job again, I hope you get to continue soon. :D
ABIGAIL
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
YAY! An update! I think that you're doing really good! Mac has to crack soon, though. Is he gonna go ninja marine on Sean if Gina calls it in? PLEASE update soon!
JackSam
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
Love it. Add more soon.
shortcake2
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
nother good chapter, glad gina's calling the cops, hopefully they'll be able to find Stella soon. wooried for her, hope her temp goes down
shewhorunswithvampires
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
very good job! update soon!! ^.^
joannahobbit
2009-08-12 . chapter 11
yay for Gina and making the call! The scene in Mac's office was great; you got Flack's reaction perfect, he does stay calm when others seem to be going off. Also, you did Adam so well, I could see him and hear him in the scene.

Excellent, amazing job!
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