Wow... just wow. This is brilliant! The last line gave me the chills. Fantastic job!

I love the emotion in this story. How you captured the way a person thinks before death, it was amazing!

I love how Kyle and Stan act in this just like your other story! They're more natural when you write them together! My favorite part is the "that's tragic, we've only just met" part that drew me into the story from the beginning!

I wanted to leave a review sayin how wonderful and amazing this story is, but I can't really think of any words to describe how this made me feel.

Wow...
just...
Wow...


i've never liked the whole stan kyle coupling, but this.. wow, and although you hinted it, it was more a devloping friendship rather than a romance.

this is possibly.. the best fanfic i have read in a long time. you should really consider becoming a professional author.

i know it sounds heartless but it would be interesting to read ne of the alternitive endings, you know, the one you said in your authors note about kyle dieing. i like the happy ending but the character death is also astonishing. just consider it.

but, i still think this fanfic is unbelieveable.

D8
*slow clap*
Good God that was...I cant even think of a proper word.
Astonishing.
Marvelous!
Incredible!
I adored it!

I must say, you are a fantastic writer!

Your transitions from each paragraph were amazing, not jumpy or confusing. Some were a bit fast, seemingly under-developed, but still wonderful! Plus your grammar and punctuation and spelling is just...superb! I didn't read the stories before this grand edit, but I believe I would still find this one to be the best.

Plus, I truly love how the suicide note was done. Not cheesy or ridiculous or anything I bet you a million people on this site would have done. It was really great.

Wonderful, wonderful story.
Second time reading it, and I'm sure I'll read it again.(:

-Dana.

Wow.
I really liked this fanfiction.
The idea is really great, although I really thought they(one of'em) would die in the end.
But hey, I'll say nothing against "happy endings", they're great at some point, of course.
I like the idea of putting Rebecca in this story.
And I totally love the idea of letting Stan see the world with different eyes after Kyle's words and hints.

Well well well done.

Okay now...
your style is... different (I'm sure i already wrote you a review to one of your stories and i mentioned this but anyway)
It's recognizable and, I think, not easy to forget.
Even when it seems pretty messy to me sometimes, I liked it, because it was different from all those "high school Style romances" I've read so far.
I really really liked it, I'm sure i won't forget this one, ever

Oh my God... I think I might cry. Seriously.

It was beautiful truthfully. I've felt this way about Stan and Kyle for awhile, like how they are soul mates - always being there for each other, helping the other when one screws up somehow, and it seems like if they never did meet each other, this situation would definitely happen.

I think the fact I want to cry is that the Emptiness in here kind of makes me consider that's how I feel, and I think... well, I'm positive it now gives me hope that I'm just missing my other half who should have been there from the start.

Thank you for writing this story.

...oh gods, you've made me cry. I loved it...

This was excellently written and flowed beautifully. I hardly come across works of fiction that execute the whole ‘soul mate’ ordeal so well and realistically (it is especially extraordinary considering how short this story is, both in wordcount and timeframe within the story).
Even though it’s clear that they only really knew each other for less than twenty-four hours, their relationship didn’t feel rushed at all, and yet by the end there was a distinct sense of closeness between the two.

Upon reflecting, I noticed this story was strangely reminiscent of an actual South Park episode, as crazy as that may sound. I suppose it’s Stan’s general attitude/outlook on things that makes me think that. Or maybe it's just the perfect mixture of humor, angst, and moral.

Also, thank you for the little author’s note at the end describing the different scenarios you considered while in the process of writing this. It’s very intriguing to think about how differently this could have ended. Honestly, the author note made me feel a little less sad that this was only a oneshot (not that it doesn’t feel complete); I already miss your amazing characterization of Stan and Kyle.

I'm sure you already realize this, but you're pretty fucking talented. Never stop writing, as it is something you are clearly born to do.

I'm glad you ended it this way, rather than with a character death like you had originally intended. You left it open-ended, so the reader can interpret their implied feelings as they will and fabricate their own ending according to how they think Stan and Kyle would react. Eloquently written, realistic, and incredibly exasperating yet oddly understandable that Stan really started to go through with all of it over a shirt. (Loved the symbolism with the shirt and how his family and friends' reaction to it represents their role in his life.)
Love the story, love the characterization, love your writing.

Sincerely,
Some Girl Who Reads Things

very nice. i can't find words to say more right now

Ahh. You can't imagine how much I love this and all your South Park stories more than I can imagine actually telling you in a coherent manner. :DD Really, I think you're my favorite author or something similar. And I think I've fangirled enough for today.

oh, this was a really good story! i enjoyed reading it!