| Reviews for Permission |
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Islander 9/14/08 . chapter 1 Dude! UPDATE! |
JerseyBella 9/13/08 . chapter 1Um, wow! |
mailbox killer 9/13/08 . chapter 1dam that was hot, is this after Campus Liaisons finish,i could so see this after that |
ArchiezCullen 9/13/08 . chapter 1hot! |
VampireCat3 9/11/08 . chapter 1That was SO HOT! Domanent edward is the most sexy by far! ps: where did u get ur bracelet? It sounds awsome! |
Shante17 9/11/08 . chapter 1I loved that too...man did I love that...hope you continue with one day the roles being switched because I know that if I was Bella I would have been like ' Hell with your rules Edward, I'm fucking you tonight whether you like it or not'...lol Update! |
TwilightFreak00 9/11/08 . chapter 1well written |
Adieu FanFic xxx 9/11/08 . chapter 1Holy. Freakin'. Fuc&k. The Gods of Domination have looked down upon you, fair child, and liked what they have seen. You are a very good apostle. You do well in spreading the word. This was fuck*n fantastic. You should be very proud of yourself. Hell, "I" am proud of you! Dom on, sister. |
my bleeding tears of agony 9/8/08 . chapter 1lkittle eddie is freaky like it not like the one you did for the contest bu nice |
Tulipp 9/8/08 . chapter 1 Different and shocking, nice. But shouldn't they have a safe word or something? I was honestly surprised that wasn't one of the "ground rules." Some way that she can let him know if she is uncomfortable? I know that this is OOC, but still... |
babygirl242 9/7/08 . chapter 1hey just wanted to say LOVE the story and LOVE Dualism! you write a dominant sexy Edward very well. is this going to be a chapter story or just a one shot? |
IthinkThereforeIwrite 9/6/08 . chapter 1hot is not the word! hahaha i think my room just morphed into hell its so hot. haha. very hotly done! |
kaypgirl 9/5/08 . chapter 1WOW. And with that ending, I really hope there's more. |
SpecialK199 9/5/08 . chapter 1Yes dear, it's very hot at the moment! How do you keep it together to write like that! LOL ... and to think some people reckon fanfic is nerdy - hell, they don't know what they're missing! Very well done. More please. |
xXLieselotteXx 9/4/08 . chapter 10o0 that...well...was rocken XD good job |