It was really cute, I cried, and I'm off to read the rest

Where are you going to update? Please!

I don't normally read many Twilight stories where they aren't vampires, but something just drew me to your story and I love it! I hope you post another chapter soon :)

WOW! this story is so well written
honestly it doesnt fall short of amazing
its got the right amount of lament that is essential to edward and bella's relationship with just the right amount of sexy
please post another chapter soon
x

I really like this story/chapter, but I have to tell you that I am **. I am now crying and I can't go to bed until I read chapter 2. Are you happy?

I'm so thrilled you decided to continue with this story! I absolutely LOVE IT! It's such a cool interesting take the whole Twilight saga. Please update soon!
-youngandobsessed

I'm not sure I love it, but I am fascinated by your mythological take on this.

Wow, this is really great. I haven't read anything like it before and can't wait to see where it's going. Great chapter :)

I am so glad you have decided to continue writing this. I went back and re read the first chapter and bawled my eyes out. I cried the first time but for some reason it hit me harder this time. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for more.

*Screaming* You've actually taken people's suggestions to write more! I can't wait to see the rest of the story!

This is such an amazing story!! I am so glad you added another chapter. Please dont wait so long to add another one, as I cant wait to see how this one ends. On another note, it should be hard for Bella to accept what Edward is and what he has to do. I dont know how she will overcome that...

Wow. I can't wait for more!

This story is really great! keep up the good work!

Poor Edward and Jasper! They can't help it that they are what they are. I feel kind of sorry for Alice too, she has no idea what she's in for. Of course afterwards though she'll be singing a different tune with Bella, huh?

Oh god, im so glad you finally updated.This story is truly heartbreaking but im so in love with it and i believe the love that E/B have for each other will bring them back together again.And i love how you got Alice to meet Jasper,poor Alice doesn't know what's hit her.Now we just need Bella and Alice to figure out how to get their men,and hopefully it wont be to long until Em/R get in on the action too.