aw, this one was too sweet!
loved it!
congrats!

oh my god. that has to be the single most sweetest thing i have ever read. my friend recommended you to me and i'm so glad! too bad its only one chapter. =( great writing though!

Loved it. =]

That was lovely - such a hush of tranquility over the whole piece. :)

Oh wow!

Can't believe I missed this.

Its lovely.

Really nice & beautiful & so very hopeful and bright.

Delightful - thanks!!
Cheers.

Aw! That was sweet!

That was wonderful! It wasn't overly corny or cliche, but maybe that's because you're such a brilliant writer that you're able to pull it off. Please write more of your stories. I miss them and I want to know what happens.

That was absolutely adorable. I like that both characters are mature in this fic -- too many Lily/James stories have overused and cliched fighting all the time. This was different, and in my opinion, much nicer. Great writing -- stick with it =]

Very nicely written. I really like the lack of dialogue - always makes a story more intriguing!

This is so ridiculously sweet.
I love it.
I especially love the line where the stars are joining to paint constellations.
=P
It's beautiful.

Where is the snogging!?

Nah I'm kidding, this is. . . is, awesome. So weel written I LOVE it. (:

Ohh I love this story, can't get over how much I love it.

(SHUT UP LISA!)

Thanks for sharin ;)

:P

x

very cute!!

i like that one. very resting.

this wasn't cliche! i really loved it :)

I just love these one- shots you write, each is different, yet each is so well written! I didn't think this one was cliche, it was calm and sweet, and the beggining of something... or maybe I just love cliches? :) All in all, it was a good story!