Sequel you better do it

All I can say is...CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! That was one of the best pokemon stories i've ever read! The story and characters had such an emotional impact that I feel like I'm at the verge of tears right now after completing it. The length of the story wasn't an issue with me and in fact I think I prefer it as one long chapter rather than a bunch of short ones. To wrap things up I want to say that I'm completely hooked on the story and I desperately want to find out what happens next! Please continue!

Plzzzzz

This should have more reviews. It starts off kind of odd, but is a pretty sweet story.

hey nice job, good plot and good characters.
but are you still working on the next one?

There were some grammatical errors that I noticed and I had hoped this story woulda have a more sophisticated

very long very good

That was a good story. Their relationship happened rather quickly, but it was still a good story. I will read the sequel, if you make it.

I signed up just to tell you this. Seriously, activated not a second ago.

All rants aside, I just wanted to say my one and only point about this story. As I read this, I kept thinking I was actually reading a book, and I just couldn't stop until I had read the entire thing. Multiple times. The pokemon chosen for the characters were perfect in the sense that their personalities matched that of the pokemon themselves. The environment was clearly defined, and Josh is a jerk. My next thought is this: What will Lara do?

great story i loved reading it was well written and entertaining the whole way through.

keep up the great work

trherring

Yeah it was kind of long... this suggestions a bit late but if you find it easier you could always write the whole thing and post it in parts, that's what my friend planned to do :D

I'm guessing that it's too late to vote...

The descriptions seem good so far I like them, Lily and Damien seem like alright people so far but Josh is a sick douchebag -.-

I wonder what her fear of pokemon stems from...

Lol Josh is as big a douche to people as to pokemon

Yay Damine's nice :D

I just noticed how Umbreon has a fear of people and Lara has a fear of pokemon so they're perfect for fixing the others problems

They make a cute couple!

That was nice of Umbreon

That was epic, I look forward to reading the rest, hopefully at some point not at two in the morning...

considering that it has been almost 2 years since you said you would make a sequel, I'm guessing there won't be one :(

But still. Are you making a sequel?

Awe that is so sweet!