Hello. this is the first time I've read any of your fan fiction, and the first time in a long time since reading fan fiction, let alone Ranma fanfics. So far it seems to have some promise, this fanfic here. Objectively, the language and grammar could maybe use a bit more nailing down, and it could be previewed and written a bit more clearly at times on who is speaking, what's going on, and the like. Personally, I think you're a bit better writer than many I've seen on . The content seems rather interesting. You grab the reader's attention in the first chapter with the fight/sparring scene. Within confines of some creative license, you stick to the characters as per the anime and manga of Ranma, as we've not seen too much of the cast from GITS, but it seems accurate, to a T, of this future world, with the med-tech's, and such. What I means is that you keep true to the characters within boundaries of suspension of disbelief, like Ranma, the fiercely independent, yet protective, on calling Nabiki 'boss.' We've not seen too much of this fan fic to say much more on these characters, your interpretation of them, the explanation of the past so many years putting Ranma and them in the 'future' from their perspective, etc.
Personally, I like the fanfic, I like the idea of it, and I personally wish to see more of it, but I wont' demand it like others. You're still active, still writing, so I'm sure you have your reasons for not continuing this at this time, but yeah. I thought I'd give my review of what I've read so far.

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue this story soon.

interesting fic. seen something like it before. not accusing or anything, just an observation. its good so far, would like to see more.

This is interesting, but needs some real fleshing out. Can't wait to see another chapter.

What would be interesting would be for Ranma,Nabiki,Ukyo and Shampoo to have brain plug's so that they could interact with the rest of the Ghost in the shell cast.

Sounds interesting. Not enough to put a definate like or not like but i am hoping to be able to say like with further chapters.

I'm really wondering where you are going with that...

Please update soon (oh! and if you could make chapters a little bit longer...)

lol update soon!

Interesting story so far. Characters seem a bit OC, but it seems to be working well for the series. Hopefully you can keep the humor level high.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Nice touch with Nabiki.

Please more of this very good story!

on a side note please correct 'Mister Soatomi' to 'Mister Saotome'

Please update soon!

O_o Okay, just how long have they been 'asleep' if the Tendo family has gotten THAT rich in the time they've been gone? If the four of them are still teenagers when they got trapped in those crystals and the bombs went off while they slept, who in Nabiki's family is still alive and running HER family's business which seems to have turned into a crime family over the years? *lol*

building nicely. A few spelling mistakes here and there but no one is perfect.

Pray continue please

You need a beta reader. The writing is choppy, the story is jerky, and there are a bunch of little grammatical errors. In addition, you seem to love the enter key.

In short, it needs a lot of work. But the storyline is solid, if very rushed, and I'm curious as to how Ranma and co. are gonna impact the GitS timeline.

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I wonder how they'll react when seeing Motoko. After all, Motoko does have purple hair, red eyes, and keeps her hair styled like Nabiki's while the bangs resemble Ranma's more. I imagine the first question might be "Is she a relative of yours?" and it would be followed up by "maybe she's the daughter of _ (Nabiki, Ranma, Xian Pu) and _ (Xian Pu, Xian Pu, Nabiki)." or something like that. Before you say that they'd be too young or simply not the right age for that then I have one thing to say. Aging mushrooms.