 Jewelle2 2009-10-25 . chapter 10I fell in love with your storytelling/writing several years back with TS fanfic. I'm glad to see that trend continue with other fandoms. Love this story and its prequel... I know, I know I'm bad about not leaving a review on HP & the Soul Gems but I was too impatient to read this story to take the time. I'm glad to have found you here on ff. net and look forward to reading what you've posted here. Thanks for sharing. |
 Celebrien 2009-10-20 . chapter 10There are almost no words that can express how much I like this story (and the one that came before it!). It's miles above the dreck that clogs up this site, and for this I am very thankful. Fantastic! |
 gothic-hands 2009-10-04 . chapter 10Very good story! |
 fancyspinner 2009-09-30 . chapter 10What an awesome set of stories! I love Harry/Ron and wish I could write it; the thing is I just can't seem too. LOL. Your stories are always a treat. |
 Hikaru Kosuzaku 2009-08-22 . chapter 10Ack! Lovely. Most lovely. Thank you much! |
 SilkStar 2009-08-21 . chapter 10Okay, in my review for the other story, I said that it seems like it sets up for the sequel. Now that I've read the sequel, I've changed my mind. Now it seems to me that the prequel was the main story and that the sequel is more of a "what happens after" sort of thing.
Don't get me wrong, I love this! I loved the plot. I love Ron's inclusion to Harry's family. The only thing I'm wondering is how Britain reacted to the Son of Merlin. Dumbledore's death was also anti-climatic, considering the large role he played in Harry's life when he was younger. I was also surprised that Draco married Ginny and the fact that I actually like it. I usually hate this pairing with a passion, no matter if it was a minor pairing or not. Finally, I loved the Weasleys and their part. It shows how ten years have passed and they have been separated and it has changed their relation, especially that of the Golden Trio's. But above all else, they are family.
Anyways, great job and thank you for this!
(I actually wrote a better review but when I tried to submit it, it went to the error page so I lost it. This second one contains the same basic ideas and stuff, but it isn't written as well as the first one.) |
 X-Dressing Seme 2009-08-13 . chapter 10Once again I have read this fabulous series, for I think the 5th time. And once again loved it all over again. Thank you so much for for so much pleasure marauding with the Potter Herd. Of course I read both stories, no point reading just hte one. Favourite bits include: Severus' post coital snuggling/harrassing, the marauding, clan elder, and the Son of Merlin... what a lark!
Thank you again for a wonderful romp! |
 The Artistic Fool 2009-07-31 . chapter 10I adored both this and Soul Gems. Wow. Actually I think I liked Soul Gems better... though I can't say why. Wonderful story! |
 Mariposadelaluna 2009-07-30 . chapter 10I totally forgot you were writing this story and just came across it yesterday. This was great and now I have to go back and re-read Soul Gems.I should have started there but I remembered how i was waiting for this story so i just had to devour it!
I should have figured it was Ron he was waiting for but that whole tricky bit with Hermione had me fooled until you made it clear. I missed Luna and neville in this story. It wrapped up really fast with the Son of Merlin and Gustav coming one right after the other. Also I wish we could have seen more of a developement between harry and Ron and maybe a little argument or flying scene. Their relationship wasn't expanded on much. It felt like you were hurrying to get it off of your "to finish" list by the end, which I understand and I am happy to get at least some resolution because I hate when it's left hanging. Thanks, I had fun. |
 DruidRaven2090 2009-06-29 . chapter 10This was fantastic. I actually avoid Ron/Harry slash as it's not quite what I like to read. I understand the appeal of it as I am a slasher myself, however, I have never found a liking for it. What you have written here is amazing. I truly enjoyed reading both City of Tents and it's prequel. Thank you so much for writing these. You have a unique style that I have loved to read.
"When life hands you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and let the world wonder how you did it." -Raven |
 Erroneously 2009-06-28 . chapter 10I really love the way you tell your stories, and the history you included in this was fascinating. Thankyou XD |
 fudge 2009-06-10 . chapter 10 I absolutely loved this story arc! Your writing is very original and well thought out. I would also like to say thanks for writing so many amazingly great Harry/Ron stories! There aren't many out there, and its always great to enjoy new ones :) |
 history 2009-05-16 . chapter 10I love a lot your story . I know what the two first children of Harry will do in the futur but what about the other? |
 mekareami 2009-05-01 . chapter 10A most excellent series of stories. I am not normally one for MPREG, but your warning was clear and this one was not squicky at all. Thank you very much for writing and I hope you continue in the HP genre. Your writing style is a pleasure to read. |
 Elyse B.A. Drakkenwild 2009-04-24 . chapter 10 ...WOW...
I just have to say that I have just stumbled upon some of the best writing/storytelling to date in my reading. Your "Soul Gems" and "City of Tents" are simply spectacular and I enjoyed them thoroughly! I found myself up until five this morning just finishing "Soul Gems"! *grin* Thank you so very much for writing these stories with such vibrant characters such as Harry and his children as well as his much loved team. I adore how you took each one and made them unique. Thank you, thank you! Happy writing!
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