OH! Wow... That was amazing. I'm so glad she showed up there and took care of him. He needed someone. Taking him back to his old neighborhood is different, but it works. This was very good. :)

I LOVE IT!

That was so considerable, spookie. The plot truly has touched me. I liked Mrs. Giordano. She is very sweet and comforting. She reminds of the woman who lives next door to my cousin’s place. Loved it. Wonderful work. Keep on writing!

-Enaka

Fantastic spook! I got misty eyed at the end. The story and the dialog both flow wonderfully. Keep up the good work.

i like edith. she is so sweet - and very wise. i think she knew exactly what bobby needed to hear. sometimes people show their pride to everyone but the person they are proud of, and bobby needed to know that. nice story!

What can I say? You know how much I love your work and this story is no exception.

I accept no credit, although it was kind of you to give it. This story is yours, I simply offered a suggestion and you brought it to life.

You have the ability to bring Eames and Goren to life in whatever situation you put them. You have a wonderful 'voice' and I am thrilled that you chose to share it with us.

I enjoyed that. Nice to see B/A as friends and the way she took care of him. I never caught the "Mustang" logo on Bobby's car-only saw "Ford" -from the body style I was figuring an old Galaxy or other model; it didn't seem like a Mustang to me. I'm gonna re-watch to see if I can catch it. I laughed a couple of times and went to see your bio to see where you're from -but there wasn't any info., so since your A/N said you didn't know anything about Canarsie I'll just assume you're not in the "TriState" area. The thought of Bobby living in the Bronx just made me laugh and the word "hoagie" for an Italian hero or sub (submarine sandwich) -well, nobody better walk into an Italian deli in Brooklyn and order a 'hoagie'...they'll get a beat down! lol

Anyway, it was a nice warm/fuzzy story. ...now if only poor Bobby could really get treated like that instead of being tormented all the time... well, who knows...maybe now that he has his "freedom" (as Dec said) his life just might change for the better.

I always review here and USA, or I try to. Sometimes that don't work depending on which place posts first and how far apart. You know I love this story. The friendship between them is wonderful and you wrote it beautifully. I loved how they helped each other out and the caring was just wonderful. Great job.

Wow, Spook - you worked really hard (and fast) on that one! Well done!

Let's hope Goren finally gets some closure on the misery of his early years - now he knows for sure that none of it was his fault, that SHOULD in theory be a huge weight off his shoulders. He's been carrying those feelings of inadequacy and blame round with him for over 40 years. It's been his prime motivation.

Can't wait to see what Vincent and the LOCI writers do with the character next season ...

L x