Ah! My favorite ninja! Point by point!

1. Who could like the Yondaime Kazekage? I hope he's screaming in hell.
5. One wonders why he became a Ninja Puppeteer when it's such a rare art . . . Meeting his predecessor was a distinct disappointment. I agree with the assessment of Sasori. I hate him for hurting Kankurou so badly and helping steal Gaara. I almost felt sorry for him, with such a terrible past, but he was just so cruel.
6. Some people say it was a draw, but I don't see how they can believe that, Kankurou clearly beat Shino's bug-ridden butt! Who walked away? Who didn't need daddy to come and save his sorry tail? That will teach that sicko for hurting Zaku!
7. I believe it! (No reference to that Uzumaki kid intended)
8. ? I haven't seen much of the show, so I have no idea what's happened here.
9. Overprotective big bro. Nice. She could probably do better than that lazy bum. If Shikamaru were ugly, would he have so many fans? He's lazy, sexist, rude, arrogant . . . And I'm a fan of Shika! At least he asked, I suppose, instead of just eloping.
10. "She trapped him." LOL! I figured he'd go for a stong woman!
12. Don't forget to use detergent! Don't need a dryer in the desert, I suppose . . .
14. That was just sweet. His father was a fool, not appreciating the blessing of having a family. Kankurou would be 10 times the man and father he was.
17. Took him long enough. Maybe his irresponsible streak kept him out for so long.
19. My one complaint in an otherwise wonderful story. Even when Kankurou gets married to a girl and raises a family, he ends up sexually attracted to Kiba! I'd like to see a story where the sight of the dog-brat makes him sick! He was nice to his kid though, that's good. No offence, you're a good writer, it's just an idea I dislike that seems to be everywhere.
20. A slow and painful death!! NO! It's hard to imagine any ninja outside of hermits, non-combat medics or supernaturally enhanced, body-stealing snake freaks reaching sixty. That just shows how good he is. It makes sense he'd die saving Gaara. He truly does love his little brother.

All together an excellent story. Fave'd!