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| Koragirl 2008-07-03 ch 16, | abuseplease finish your story ! |
| dot-dot-and-dot 2003-12-08 ch 16, | abuseargh... damn... should never have read it... a cliffhanger is left behind and this story wasn't updated for almost 2 years... damn... i hate cliffhangers! >_ |
| dot-dot-and-dot 2003-12-07 ch 5, | abuseYugi just grinned and took another bite of her toast. |
| Jawelik 2003-05-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseOkay, this is pretty good so far, but geez all the typos are just driving me nuts! otast instead of toast, cdars instead of cards, I mean use a spell checker PLEASE! A few typos I can take, but more than a dozen per chapter is just too much! Other than that its a good story, but these irritating mistakes will be enough to drive many a reader away. |
| Jin Kazama 2002-08-27 ch 13, | abuseHELLO! I'm just reasently discovered your fics. They are funny hei? Well I just have a few corections. (And trust me. I wouldn't is I wern't an 'All Knowing Yugioh Finactic'!) Errr... let's just say that I am a bit over-obsessed. #1: I do believe that in your other fic HP& the shadow relm you said that ne was no. #2: I'm not sure about the japoneese versoin but in the dubbed Joey didn't make it for the DMT. Yugi lent him a hand... and a chip. Well R&R mine. Jin. |
| puka 2002-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abusego on!! |
| DarkGatomon 2002-05-10 ch 16, | abuseI wish you would have taken the time to spellcheck. It takes, what? A minute -- two, tops -- per chapter? It wouldn't get rid of things such as "silver and old shears," but at least there wouldn't be "he wathced as the owman cried. but she didn't cry teras." It would have made the fic a lot more enjoyable -- or at least provided less specific things to detract from it. |
| NileGal 2002-04-12 ch 16, | abuse(walks up to you and shakes you) Where the hell have you been!? I have been waiting for a new chapter forever! I got so hung up on my YGO/CCS crossover that I write LOR fanfiction now!! Come on, PLEASE UPDATE!! I am going to die!!! |
| Xenotra 2002-03-29 ch 9, | abuseThat duel kicked butt! Sweet. |
| Xenotra 2002-03-04 ch 7, | abuseWhoa, that kinda sucks. I'm not sure I like Aria at this exact moment...I'm glad I got back into this. |
| Lavender Nightmares 2002-01-30 ch 1, | abuseHey, YOU FINALLY REVIEWED MY STORY!!! I must now praise you. *bows down on knees* THANK YOU GREAT SATRUN!!!!!!!!!!!! I was wondering if I can borrow Ikky. I happen to be making a stupid 'Anime characters say the darnest things' fic and I need Ikky. You can borrow Melissa. She's annoying, but that's the point. Oh and if your wondering why I didn't want you to review my fic was because I happened to of been in the dumps that day. Please forgive me :-) And when your account works again, SET UP THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! Bye |
| AlexiaWinters 2002-01-26 ch 16, | abuseThis was really cool! Please, add more!!! |
| Sailor-Jade 2002-01-23 ch 16, anon. | abusegod damn it write more or ill take you off of my favorite authors list!!!! |
| no_name 2002-01-13 ch 16, anon. | abusePPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!! hurry up and write the next chapter Owari! |
| Lavender Nightmares 2002-01-12 ch 16, | abuseHi! I love ur story! But I've got a question. My brother is a big time obbsessor and got me into it. Where did u get all the info on Yugioh when the show didn't come out. Oh and is that contest still going on? I wanna bug the heck outta Yugi! |