Not too crazy bout the Ren x Ishi pairing. Maybe nuetral. But I'm somewhat interested. I like what you wrote so far though. There was some good moments between them. Interesting story Ren x Ishi but there's other subplots here too. I love the idea of Orimhime being close friends with Renji platonically, very cute. He's so down on his luck it's nice to at lease see he has someone who cares for him. Killer on the loose and how did Isshin end up that way. Very interesting. I'd love to read more. I can't wait when Renji and Ishida come face to face again. I can't wait to for it.

This is nice... err, I don't think I can say modernisation of Bleach, but I quess you know what I mean.

There is some very good descriptions, but personalities haven't yet come to surface. Not that it is necessarily a bad thing; it just makes me feel this is just the beginnin! I relly think you should continue this, it has been a while since last update :)

Tesla is the victim and Mayuri was the creep, as always. I wonder who the murderer is... Anyway, I like this chapter, and too bad for me, I read the fifth chapter first before I was able to read this, I thought I already did. Anyway, I liked the interaction between the Ishidas, how they come up with come backs, anyway, my only comment is that Ryuuken seems a little friendly and haughty, I think... can't really imagine him smirking.
Anyway, update soon.

its getting really good

I was touched to see Ishida sympathized Renji and even tried to defend him. The last part with Isshin is quite a twist, though. I wonder if there will be more of Ryuuken's relationship with him as well? I don't mind if there isn't, as long as I get to see Renji's and Uryuu's relationship progress. Another great chapter as always, hope to see more soon.

Holy Crap this is the best thing I've read in a LONG time (that I can proudly say isn't Yaoi, lawl (yet)(Or will it be?) (OMG TOO MANY ()'S NOW >

ah! Renji has to go to the doctor! i wonder what will happen with Ishida...and the murderer... lol i hope i see more because this is one of two stories that actually continue (the other being mine so i guess i should'nt count it) so keep going and make fellow RenIsh lovers happy!!

Great story! I love the suspense!! O.O

I like this a lot and so I say this: "UPDATE!" Because it's that good. ;D

I really do love and enjoy this story. Ishida's and Renji's personalities are just so awesome and I love the atmosphere you give these two. Uryu owning a taylor shop is just pure genius, and I can totally see Renji living in a apartment, but can't support himself.

Loving this more and more, can't wait for an update~ ♥

Great start. Hope to see more soon.

ugh! i love this story!! and the couple RenIsh! (if my name hasn't given that away) update soon!!

Interesting story, I like how you portraid Renji.^^
Keep up the good work.^^

I'm wondering where this is headed. Update soon. Anything with Uryu and Renji is welcome to me.

You really made my day. Poor Renji, he leads such a crappy life, but Ishida will make everything better!:) I can't wait to read more!