Hey who said you could stop after just 2 chapters to leave us all hanging. Please write some more.

Continue with this story. I want to see what happens next!!

You know you're amazing. This is amazing. Now, update it before I kick you in the shins

What a great beginning! You've pulled me into your story! Nice change of pace to have Elizabeth a victim of the Wraith instead of one John Sheppard.

Aww! ehat a chapter. i loved it.

looking good!