I tremble at the thought with Crulnir having knowledge of the future. Tremble. Even Lord Angmar couldn't do so much damage.
And yet, with a lodestone like Arwen, the odds are still against him.

Hilarious. I loved your references to the Simirillion, particularly Ungoliot. I loved Arwen's insultingly nonsensical backstory. And I love Saruman, charismatic genius that he is, unable to function because the girl is to slow to be fooled. (Polyjuice potion, right?)

Of course, his rampant petty sadism means he will probably hypnotize Legolas and give him to Arwen to keep her out of the way while he takes over the world (poor Legolas).
Update soon.

*grins* She's so stupid she's funny. I'm waiting for your next update!

Bye,
Lisette

He-hee, a fun story :).
I found polyjuice ;).

I love this story! What a great idea.

I'm liking the Arwen-Jade character's continual mythology references, although when reading the story the native language of Mary Sue and its exclamation marks is a little difficult to get used to in the middle of a Saruman story.

I'll admit it- I'll laugh my head off if her giving him the books ends up with the Fellowship being captured or something by Saruman, and Saruman tortures the elf by giving him to the Sue, while he goes on to take over the world.

Hi, I like it! Hmm I wonder what happens when Saruman Gets to Two Towers. I kinda pity the sue though, how can anyone think Legolas is their true love when they haven't even met him? But such is the way of the sue. Anyway keep on writing! Victorious