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UPDATE IT! please!

Interesting start and good use of tone. I like where this seems to be going.

Just a suggestion:

Try separating some of the information into paragraphs. It makes it much easier on the eyes of the reader, not to mention it also keeps the fic looking clean and well organized.

Other than that, good job and I look forward to seeing more in the future.