This is wonderful story I would love to hear the rest. Are you going to finish?

That was REALLY good. But is that the end? This would make a GREAT picture-book, I was imagaining it. -) Update soon! (if that wasn't the end.)

This was so iteresting. Are you going to continue? I sure hope so! I wonder what happens next? I can't wait to read!

o.I can't wait to see what happens next!

good story,keep on writing

What happens next? Please write another chapter! Please! This is so cool! Is the baby okay? Please keep writing!