I don't understand why this isn't one of your favorites as it is defiantly one of mine. As normal for me I have nothing but praise. I love you style, and the subject matter. You have a knack for making my favorite list.

Nice chapter. I would never picture a Pokemon like Togekiss murdering a boatload of humans, but I can understand why it did so. I'm glad the old woman was able to show it that not all humans are bad, even though we are distructive. Update soon.

I wouldn't say this chapter sucked. It had sort of a...tribal-like feel to it. It would be hard to look in only one direction like a Nosepass would be able to. No wonder they would consider a Probopass their leader since it can see in different directions.

Hah, it was kind of like the Cronicles of Narnia in Pokemon form. It was also really dark. That kitten was pretty tough though if he could have taken out Frosslass with one Fire Blast. Plus, another reference to that Shadowland thing from the last chapter.

Well, that was an odd chapter. And it had Pokemon religion! Plus, it had a lot of references to different myths and ledgends from the Pokemon universe. It was interesting to see that Umbreon knew a lot of things that most Pokemon do not. It took me a little while to figure out who Electivire learned created them, but when I finally did, I almost kicked myself. Although, how he found out Satoshi created Pokemon from a laptop in the Pokemon world is beyond me.

Nice chapter. It was interesting to see how a Roserade would hunt from its point of view. That poor Dustox (Or at least, I think it was a Dustox that the Roserade was hunting) never saw it coming.

Wow, I really liked this one. It kind of reminded me of a cross between a bunch of creepy poems, and something that a crazy person would chant. It really suits Mismaguis perfectly. Best chapter so far in my opinion.

You're right, this one was kind of...odd. Poor Tangrowth, he just wanted to make sure the human was okay, and he got roasted by an Arcanine. I'm still unsure about what happened at the end. Tangrowth fell off the cliff, right?

Nice chapter. So the boy managed to catch the Rhyperior, and everything turned out okay. I'm glad that the Rhyperior isn't alone any more.

I really liked this chapter. It was interesting to see how the Weavile and Sneasel pack worked, and how they had their own names for different Pokemon and places. I wish you had writen more. I would have liked to have seen how the hunt went. I wonder why they worshiped Cresselia.

Nice chapter. Of course all Lickilicky would like to eat. But its pretty cool that it can cook too. I liked how Lickilicky kept on getting side tracked by thinking about what certain things taste like. The Seven Stars, huh? That's the fancy restaurant that you can battle a bunch of people in double battles, right?

Well, that was an, uh, interesting chapter. That Ambipom has some issues. The part about Pachirisu was funny. That Luvdisk was kind of weak. That, or Ambipom is insanely strong. Probably a mixture of both.

Nice chapter. Seeing a battle from the Pokemon's point of view is interesting. What was the Pokemon Gallade was facing? The only guys I can think of would be Sceptile or Grovyle.

I like how you used nicknames for different things. They seemed to separate the Weavile from other Pokemon. It seems odd that the Weavile would worship Cresselia instead of Darkrai, seeing as they are dark types (I think). I guess the Pokemon think of Darkrai as evil.

Poor Magenzone. He just wanted to be strong for his trainer, and he ended up evolving. His trainer shouldn't have reacted like that. At least his friend decided to capture him.