i have no words. this was very beautiful. one thing i would suggust is to fix your typos so its easier for people to read (well its not alot but yeah you should fix them). gomen if everyone tells you this but it was really awesome so typos aren't a real big issue. loved it and gives it *

Hi, I'm sam/ruby. Im a new wrighter,and I think I love foxes as mutch as you love wolves! Well plese read my story. It's on Yugietopaz. Its cald the cristil of five instinks!Well revew me! OH and pardin the spelling.

woah that was kawaii! nicely done

Nice message.. but I really with you'd do more than just throw a paragraph together and post it.

Wai! This is so kawaii!

Except for a couple of typos, this story would be number one in my category of favorite fics. Thanks, you've encourged me into sending in my own FF:TSW fic!

Take care and ja ne!

i recently saw the movie and nearly cried at the ending. this was a good short fic, however the constant typos kind of marred the experience. revise this piece of work and i know that it will be even better received (as well as better understood). again, good fic!