Hey, loved the story!

To clear up your concerns about your grammar - while it's not perfect, it's better than quite a few author's whose native tongue is English. You could find a beta if you're too worried but to be honest; the story is easily readable and your plot more than makes up for any errors.

Don't let any whiners get you down, your story is fantastic and FF needs more authors like you!

Duana x

oh this was adorable! I likes it a lot! good job!

Loved this story Draco was SO cute ** and Harry really hot

hi i can read and understand this much beter than some so called english writers works im not english there for english is not my mother tong.

Lovely fic)Great job, it was very easy and fun to read) Thanks for writing)

aww i liked that :) really good :) thanyou

A very cute story!

ANd whoever said your English was bad should be ashamed! I would have never guessed that English WASNT your mother tounge! You're probably as good as me, and heck I'm ONLY english! Well, don't let it get you down, I know people that are english that don't write (or talk for that matter) as good as you! :)

Absolutley cute so far, that's all I have to say.

loved the Dracangst, the smutt, the smex, loved it all!

i'm just reviewing cause i love this story and i thought it should have one hundred reviews ;)

please write another fic Harry x Draco, cute and sweet just like this one! i miss fanfics like this...

kisses,

lindsay

This is an absolutely lovely story. It's adorable, well written, and is the ideal length for short sweet reading while still containing substance. There is the occasional grammatical or syntax error, that could easily be remedied by a beta, which I suggest you get. It would polish your piece a bit. These minute errors, however, do not reflect your true ability. Your mastery of the English language is evident in the story's quality. Please continue to write. Thank you.

Hey,

I LOVED IT!

every chapter was very well written!

congratulations ON THE FAB JOB!

keep it up

;)

Aww, that was cute! The end made me laugh. I think you did well, considering it is your second language. That is a great effort. Loved it!

Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!)

This was lovely, exactly what I was looking for. Your grammar is a little rough, but I hardly noticed and it was very rude of someone to bring it up. When I read that English is not your first language I was even more impressed. Good luck!