I really enjoyed this read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Yeah- this one was really good!

Oh, I love it! That was excellent :)

awesome, cant wait till nxt chapter!

This was really good. I can't wait to see you turn it into a full story.

Yeah!

Good job. By the way, your story has been nominated for the Best OneShot Award on http:// redmoonawards. yolasite. com/

please update this story, i seriously love it, you done great job here...

Mel
xox

Hey-lo! This is really good!

AMAZING! u hav a real talent as a writer!! i love it! definatly subscribing! :) :) :)

Nice story! I've liked it!

I enjoyed this a lot.
Fits in perfectly as a missing scene.
It's believable and well-written, which is refreshing.
Nice work.

Perfect - what can I say? Exactly how I imagine it would have gone. Great job.

I liked it! It was really in character. Good job!

I love it so much!1 Jacob is so cool...can you please write more fanfic aboute Nessie and Jake...I just really love that...I love Taylor Lautner, haha...more power to you... =D