this is so amazingly written. the emotion is heavily sad but very clear. you couldn't have explained Jin's feelings any better. i love this short fic.

I adored this! It gave me a good feeling of closure to the story. LOVE IT! DDD However, sometimes the dialogue would get a little confusing because of the lack of indentation editing, but other than that, the story is EXCELLENT.

The ending reminded me of Hotarubi's death on Basilisk.

Not bad. I like to think that they did survive, but you're probably right. Keep writing