OMG! Girl you have gotta continue the story to chapter five or even until chapter six! I cried a river in chapter four! I beg of You make another chapter plese! Please finich the story I want to find out how will Brainy save Skittles and himself please!

Wow...

EPIC! PPMS ^.^

Wow. Very nice update. You have a few misused words, though. Don't be afraid to use an online dictionary or thesaurus when you're writing. They'll help make the feelings you're conveying clearer to the reader. "Eliminated," "diluted" and "bashful" for instance, are not the correct words for what you're trying to describe.

Also, Triplicate Girl's real name is Luornu, not Lulu.

Glad to see Clark/Superman I is okay. Keep up the good work. :)

I'm happy you've updated, and I look forward to more f this story whenever it is posted.

OMG PLZ PLZ CONTINUE. I MIGHT DIE IF YOU DONT

Lolz.

Great chappie! It was long, which I thoroughly enjoyed. I think one word sums up this chappie- AWESOME!

PPMS ^.^

Cute story so far...me like it...and now for questions.

1. Where's the Legion?
2. Will Vi be 'rescued' by them if they appear?
3. Will Brainy go good?
4. Will Brainy turn human?
5. If the Legion 'saves' Vi, will she still see Brainy and Brianna and Skittles and Drew?

What? You knew I was going to ask something, right?

Wow. This is really getting good. The allusion to Hades and Persephone is a lovely touch. Oh, and the song breaks. I'm a sucker for those.

Carry on. :)

This is a good story! It was kinda heartbreaking, but yet it was very heartwarming!

I was so happy when I saw this! Poor Violet, she being hurt so much! And Brainy finaly had the guts to stand up to his ancestor and be kind to a scared little girl! He was helping her read! SO SWEET!

A couple questions: will Brainy turn human in this fic? Where's the rest of the legion right now? Will Spike come in?

I look forward to the rest of this fic-please please please update soon!

Wow!

I love how Brainy was mean and cruel in the beginning, but is getting warmer and warmer. I LOVE IT!

PPMS ^.^

Oh. Good plot idea! The details and wording is great too! I look forward to seeing more!

Also, just a small irking... you mentioned Computo. Can Computo exist if Brainy never was there to build it? It's not important, but it kind of bothers me.

Write more. Soon. :D

Brainy already fell for her didn't he? I swear, that Coluan is the most emotional, stubborn headed, idiotic robot to come online in the cosmos. I can't wait to see what will happen with them in the next chappie-update soon!

OH MY GOD...THAT IS AMAZING i love how at the end you've made him go back to hating her. This is brillinat!

Keep up the good work girl!

Love Sarccy

OH! Cliff hanger! So cool!