I love it! The ending was awesome like it ends on a cliff hanger and now I want more. Please continue!

I really like how you wrote this, especially the end :)

Would love a second chapter where they meet again n.n

I really love SanjixLuffy but I find it's really hard to do. This sort of slice-of-life piece was incredibly realistic, if not fantastic, especially with Zoro's piece thrown in.
Cheers.

Awesome awesome awesome awesome! Pls pls continue if you can..

SEQUEL. Or two. Hell, all you want.

SERIOUSLY.

gah. i freaking NEED to know what happens next.
please tell me luffy wisens the ** up and comes back to pay sanji another visit.

i'm generally a zolu girl, but this somehow works for me.

i remembered reading this from somewhere. a very well written fanfic. i just really wish it wasn't a one-shot. would love to read more if you would please continue? thanks

CONTINUE!!
Please? I can't bear it! Luffy being sad like that is... is... it's WRONG. There's something fundamentally wrong with it! Get sanji to make him smile again! Please! *pelts you with Oreos and PopTarts* PLEASE!

That was a really good story please continue it if you have time :)

aww don't leave it like that! What about Sanji-kun? And Luffy-chan?!

This is a really beautiful story... I would really like to read more of this story... more chapters... so... please carry on? Please continue?

Oh, I likes! I like it a lot! It has a very noir feel to it. I'm torn between wanting it to be continued and leaving it alone. Because I find the ending simply lovely. There's that sense of hope left hanging and it's quite beautiful. But if you continue it, I certainly wouldn't complain. Lol. Your Sanji is a wonderful narrator and Luffy is so heartbreakingly sad. We really do need more SanLu fics. I have no idea why it's so rare! But this is a wonderful contribution. I look forward to seeing more works from you. =]

I would like to see this continued...^_^ This is a pretty good story...^_^

magnificently written. positively professional.

Ahh I love this! It's so sad and yet alsto so sweet! I love how you made Luffy so withdrawn, and you're Sanji behaviour is spot on :D