I certainly didn't know there were video game fanfics here before this, and I'm certainly glad this is the first one I happened upon. As I grow a deeper obsession for this game, I find the fan base very likeable so far, and this story is a good representation of that. I found it humorous and intertaining. Definitely Bitching! (Kudos if you got that aged expression!)

love the story so far Adorios.

I have to say, I really liked what you have written so far on this fan-fic. I think that, if Nintendo got the completed story, it might have a possibility of becoming the basis of another Metroid game. However, the underlying treason and mysteries are a bit much for the traditional string of Metroid games, which are, of course action/shooter, with only a few minor puzzles (mostly in the form of Morph Ball tunnels). All in all, great job!

i loved the chapter title!

...wait...what? samus' 8th mission to BSL? are you referring 2 metroid fusion? what are the other 7?

This Chapter was quite nice, and up to this point i had always thought Listal was human. However, there have truly only been two betrayels in the chapter, even though the title is still applicatple, it is not as big as you make it appear.

However, all in all, a very nice chapter _

OMG, ME, IN A SUIT! I LOVE YOU ADORIOS!

Adorios, you may remember me, fro MHQ. It has come to my attention that, this fanfic hasnt been updated in... 3-4 months? Please try to update it.

The description makes Ardorios sound like Quick Man from Mega Man II, hehe. This is really interesting and I can't wait to read on!

Hmm... How long until I appear?

Damn! that was sick! Freakn awesome chapter

AWESOME! NEW BADASS SUIT! WOOT!

Oh shoot. We havin war already

The X predator. Nice intro.

More please i love this story and where its going.