This Chapter was quite nice, and up to this point i had always thought Listal was human. However, there have truly only been two betrayels in the chapter, even though the title is still applicatple, it is not as big as you make it appear.
However, all in all, a very nice chapter ^_^

OMG, ME, IN A SUIT! I LOVE YOU ADORIOS!

Adorios, you may remember me, fro MHQ. It has come to my attention that, this fanfic hasnt been updated in... 3-4 months? Please try to update it.

The description makes Ardorios sound like Quick Man from Mega Man II, hehe. This is really interesting and I can't wait to read on!

Hmm... How long until I appear?

Damn! that was sick! Freakn awesome chapter

AWESOME! NEW BADASS SUIT!! WOOT!!

Oh shoot. We havin war already

The X predator. Nice intro.

More please i love this story and where its going.

when will you continue the story? i LOVE it. i give you 500/5.

uh WHY DIDN'T THE OTHER HUNTERS GO WITH SAMUS? sory about that but why didn't they go with her? it would have made things much more interesting.

That was an awsome battle! Great Job!

I can't wait for the next chapter. You're a pretty good author Adorios =)

> These hunters were definitely not a force to be reckoned with

I think you mean to say 'definitely a force to be reckoned with'.

http://idioms./force+to+be+reckoned+with