LMAO, this chapter is SO funny.
Just after finishing this bit, I understood that pun with 'crack' lmfao.
Excellent!

Ah, it was funny at the beginning, no, hilarious!!

Oh why, oh why, Shino/Kiba?
-Bleaching brain-.

haha omg
still so cute

very poe-ish...i can hear the heartbeat now. king is not everyone's cup of tea, but he happens to be one of my faves. 'it' is definitely on my top five books list. good job a the horror attempt.

so...i dislike hinata, but this was truly sad. omg i could cry at the anguish that kiba is feeling. i was scared you were going to have him kill himself. and the fact that his best friend said he wished it was kiba and meant it. but alas there is shikamaru with some logic and reassurance. good job...you did well in getting the pain kiba was going through.

i loved this! it has to be my fave by far. boys being boys...haha and the fact that you even got neji and shino blushing...was great!

ok...i thought bark was funny...this was omg this was i have tears rolling from my eyes. from the moment shino and kiba started speaking i was laughing. it's the banter the pair have. and poor poor poor hinata.

then ino strolling in like she's God's gift...hinata asking if naruto would like that sorta thing...and kiba patting her hand saying yes...omg it's so funny

shino...'oh sh*t look look, right there' i'm glad you gave him more lines than just.. 'hn.'

and since you've blown off your homework this long...i bet another story of yours could use an update...i mean, you know, i'm just suggesting since you know you've already not done the homework...it's just a hint or nudge... *coughupdatemustlovedogscough* :)

so d...let's see dog is to obvious, so day? dinner? dough? dance? (omg if you make shino dance...lol) dart? desert?

terri

love it! when shino said 'daddy's talking' i thought i'd wet my pants! then 'stumpy'! omg i could not stop laughing! i'm still laughing now! and then kiba seeing hinata, 'oh screw this' i swear i almost didn't make it through the first part of the story!

'wake up and smell the gay' i love shika and lee talking about gai! this one was so awesome...then it turned...

smexy.

when kiba's voice dropped and he said 'daddy's got a trick or two...then 'it's your turn to bark for me'...so so so kiba.

now for my guess on the letter c...although i know you already have the words picked, i just like to guess.

c...cake? cot? cuddle? collar? (too obivious) cartoon? calendar? carrot?

til next time, terri.

first to review, yay! but you knew i'd be all over this story with my sweet kiba kun! i must say this is freakin hilarious!!i can't believe he got shino to go through with this idea. aliens...pssh. and poor hinata...so sweet and innocent.

and i can see kiba's sly expression tricking her into believing shino and shibi were from a different planet. this so reminds me of some of the a/n conversation from MLD. you did say that shibi, tenten, and shino were illegal aliens...haha.

can't wait for letter b...let me guess; bake? batter? beach? bugs? (but not spiders cause they ain't bugs but arachnids, right, spidernerd?) bushes? boxes...or in kiba's case boxers?

have a great week!