 Yvaughn 2009-11-06 . chapter 7I am *loving* this story! Please please please keep posting. And who knows... if Bonny and Mike *can* change things, maybe they'll change things for the better (*cough*Wash*cough*)!
Depends on your theories of the, ahem, "Continuum" :-)
Everyone's wonderfully in character. I'm loving the story, the dialogue, and Rayne's truce. Post more, please! |
 Baschashe 2009-11-02 . chapter 7How did I miss this treasure?!
It's great!! Of course it's obvious who the two passengers are, but I don't mind! I just love the idea, the plot and argh! I can't wait to see how it concludes...or if they will find out!
Please do continue with this, it's awesome! |
 SusanMarieS 2009-11-02 . chapter 7I LOVE THIS STORY. i'm so glad you decided to update it. i just really like this story line. can't wait for more and thanks again for the update |
 Kristafied 2009-11-02 . chapter 7So glad to see another chapter of this, and I think I'm figuring out what's going on -- and it's totally cool! |
 Hebi R. 2009-11-01 . chapter 7Thank you for not asking, but this chapter made me all excited for the next, so I'll just review anyway. |
 Fima 2009-09-21 . chapter 6Oh, I haven't had a good laugh like today reading thi sory. I can't say more: it is adorable how Jayne nd River form theit "truce" aka allience. I am looking forward to the next chapters. |
 SusanMarieS 2009-08-12 . chapter 6I like this story very much, and would totally appreciate it if you would continue it. It is so convincing and true to form. I love the Michael you’ve created along with Bonnie. Thank you for the effort you’ve put forth. |
 FaithfulELF 2009-06-21 . chapter 6So far i've loved all the stories you've written for Jayne and River. Hope you plan to keep em up! |
 crwong 2009-06-06 . chapter 6lol, so funny that river and jayne are plotting against their son. poor bonny, meeting her father for the first time. i'm intrigued with how the two kids are going to get home. |
 UrbanFool 2009-06-06 . chapter 1 I hope you get your muse back! This is too good a story to drop. |
 Hebi R. 2009-04-27 . chapter 6Definately wantin' more. |
 Lenquo 2009-04-16 . chapter 6I really like what you have so far, and bonus points for the Dr. Who reference! |
 Twitchy Louie 2009-04-11 . chapter 6I really enjoyed this story, but was really disappointed to see that you haven't posted in a real long time. Please post soon! |
 UrbanFool 2009-03-28 . chapter 6I would love an update on this fic! I'm really enjoying your stories --all of them. |
 Jdcrmn 2009-02-14 . chapter 6I think this chapter is great! But I'm sure that whatever changes you make to it will only make it better! I'm loving this story and I can't wait to read the rest! |