This was so beautiful and well written, I just love it. My favorite part:

“Josh.” The ice shuddered with the vibrato of Drakes angel voice, and Josh forced his eyes to Cross the shorter boys. He didn’t say a word. He had nothing left to say. Just a cold, and unfeeling deep-freeze that was threatening to suffocate him. With a pang of remorse, he realized the sun hadn’t surrendered, not at all. It had just decided to use Drake as its super weapon. Josh ground his teeth together with alarming force. He knew now the sun would win.

Wonderful. And cute. And just...ugh. This is really a work of art, PI, really. So beautiful. There are some grammical mistakes, but most none to noticable, and the quanity of this story makes up for it. Also, one of the almost-last lines "lingering assurances of his love" was cute. Made me feel tingly. Damn Drake.

~Sunny

P.S. Sorry for your memaw. ='(

Wow...

This is the second Drake and Josh fic I've ever read,

and I am utterly blown away!

I adore your wrting style,

it's so poetic and realistic and just damn perfect!

I particularly liked Josh's internal battle with the sun.

"Josh smirked, morbidly amused at the sun’s decision to hide--To let Josh really feel shrouded in the pain that weighted him down and held him motionless on the spot. He had finally won the battle, the sun had surrendered to the bitter cold of the occasion, and Josh couldn’t help but be smug."

*Is speechless, in good way*

xWithLoveFromKhaosKittyx

This moved me to tears. Truly amazing.

:D!!
AMAZING.
I loved that. You've got some serious skills with writing longer things. (I'm better with super short oneshots. xD)
Two things though:
There were some errors here, "Josh’s voice was flat, unfeeling, and his eyes were focused on something far away as he replied. “Big boys don’t cry Drake. Death happens, and im pre-med what better time to practice detachment than now?”"

And in the paragraph after that, I don't think Drake would have used the word 'flourescent'. :P

I love the reference to ice and sun that kept weaving it's way throughout the story.
:3

Thanks.

woww, idk how u describe things so well. anyone who's lost someone can relate. Josh shouldn't push ppl away, but at least he didn't push drake away. And crying wouldn't kill him.
u wrote this perfectly. and u will be ok dude.
I loveth u!

DAW, yay. I liked it, it was sad. ...You know I hate reviews. D:

Hi memaw! *waves* :3

~*Kris*~