 CowboySteel 2008-11-23 . chapter 4i realy enjoyed this. it's sweet and totally in character for dean! loved it. x |
 jensensgirl 2008-09-02 . chapter 1I was just turned on to your writing today and I shamelessly admit...I'm reading it while at work.
I read I sing the body electric and loved it! I also shamelessly admit, I like Ruby and Dean having angry sex. I loved how she became somewhat human in response to a very intimate setting.
Anyway, now I'm reading this story. You have a great handle on these characters and the personalities. I look forward to continuing and reading more SN stories.
Thanks for the great read today! |
 PADavis 2008-09-02 . chapter 4Oh, nicely done. And a great 3rd Season wrap up.
Phoebe |
 ToxicLullaby 2008-09-01 . chapter 4*Thud* Dude, awesome story! The fourth chapter was my favorite! Me thinks it is going to be divine intervention, well, in one way or another. I love your writing. It flows so naturally and draws me in to where I can't move away until I've finished it! And I have ADHD! That's saying something right there. Great job! |
 Nana56 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Wow! Wasn't expecting this. Thought the previous chappy was it. This one was great, too. I'm so anxious to get Dean out of Hell! Just over 2 weeks to go, but who's counting?
This was the perfect capper for the rest of the fic. Well done! |
 Nana56 2008-09-01 . chapter 3Great little fic. I've really enjoyed it. Well done. *huggles* |
 Ster1 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Thanks for posting the whole story so quickly! What an insightful look into Dean's faith, especially with the ending happening after Dean's return. And I could really see Sam's growth, from the anger in his teenage years to his later quiet maturity. Loved the way Sam had a chance to read about the things Dean was never able to tell him...
And yet, even after his resurrection, Dean still can't believe things don't come with a price tag. Who knows? Maybe he's right...I guess we'll see in three weeks! |
 Ster1 2008-09-01 . chapter 3You know, I think this is the first fic I've read where the boys are so fallible. Sam hacked a computer to up his grades-yup, it actually makes sense considering his itinerent childhood. Sam doing drugs made me laugh. And the drag out fight with John? So could have happened. (Not to mention the nice detail that Pastor Jim found religion after prison!) No saints here, just very human folk... |
 PADavis 2008-09-01 . chapter 2Loved the new chapter - sharp and painful but gentle and empathetic. Love this POV, and the tag.
Phoebe |
 SciFiRN 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Wonderful ending...thanks for not throwing this one away, because it was very, very well done. |
 SciFiRN 2008-09-01 . chapter 3I loved it! This really is a great story. I'm going to have to check out some of your others, because if you thought this wasn't good enough to post your others must be even better! |
 SalemsChild 2008-09-01 . chapter 2Whoa...another great chapter. I still can't believe you thought this story was sub-par. The descriptions of everything he's feeling and going through, as well as his descriptions of his room and roommate are so classically Dean-like, it's almost scary.
If this story was a "throw-away", I've DEFINITELY got to check out the stories you've posted with a happy heart. They must be phenomenal! |
 Ster1 2008-09-01 . chapter 2Another chapter?? Cool!
It must be pretty lonely for Dean to be feeling all this stuff-knowing he's going to die, having a cardiac arrest-and really have no one to talk to. *sniffles* And poor Sam, trying so hard despite Dean's apathy. It helps put Season 3 Sam, with his insistence that Dean care about dying, into much better perspective...
Great chappie! |
 Ster1 2008-09-01 . chapter 1Hey, wasn't expecting 1st person Dean POV but it really works. Dying and still snarky! Love how Dean hides, even from himself.. |
 Nana56 2008-09-01 . chapter 2Another day! Woohoo! Poor guy, my heart aches for him and for Sam. Him for being the one to go through it and Sam for being the loved one of someone who's going through it. I've sat in Sam's chair.
Great job. |