I LOVE CHARLIE STORIES! Fantastic work! Keep it up!

wow! you certainly took them and the reader on a rollercoaster ride! you practically had my crying when Charlie died and then by the end you had my laughing! I felt so sorry for the boys and Chrissy whey they thought that Charlie was dead :o( Alphonses guilt was well written too :o) and Ice's reaction to the whole thing was brilliant - so Ice! :o) Good having Chrissy there along the way o'course :o) Her finding the letter was cool :o) the initial idea was a great twist on the operation thing :o) and I could just imagine the Alphonse and Ice doing that to Charlie :o)

Interesting... I've never seen "Players", but this is nonetheless an intriguing story! Well Done, Sassy! :)

Wow, a Players fic! I'm impressed! I thought I was like the only person in the world who had ever watched that show, lol. Anyway, fab plotline, love the interaction between the main characters. Junkie xxxx