A great story. Very good.

Well, I'm curious about what's next. You're a Stargate Atlantis fan aren't you?

Ah. This is quite interesting so far. Although I'd imagine rather that if sent to Earth to visit his sister, a family man like O'Brien would take the opportunity to bring his wife and kiddies with him.

It's got that "seat of your pants" presence! I can't wait to see what his sister has that's needed. The story moves pretty quickly, however, but still doesn't loose the ability to keep one's mind!

I love how you convert the Stardate. It makes things more "real". :P Can't wait for more!