I really liked this one-shot and the ending was amusing. I would be so happy if you wrote this in Edward's POV!

Hehe;

that was a long one-shot!

:p

I liked it though.

I liked how she imagined Edward as a murderer and that line with Emmett kissing Bella made me burst into a fit of giggles :p

So CUTE! I loved it! I normally don't read one-shots, but yours was amazing!

Keep up everything your doing!

Zuki