Simply fantastic! :)
I can't really find any constructive criticism now, but it might be
because I haven't put this book since yesterday evening, and now it's in the afternoon, I'm tired.
Believable Bond, sad but not far-fetched break-up, one of the best James Bond plots yet.

This is one of the best stories i have read on fanfiction net.

Well done!

hi Andrew,

Thank you for this novel. I have only read the first couple of chapters but it catches beautifully the character, mileu and also the excitement of the world of james bond. There is the pleasure of the prose with excitement of one of the finer films.

I have read a few good online Bond stories and abandoned many as disappointing.To produce something that is both faithful and new and is obviously a real challenge. To me it is one these early chapters meet triumphantly. I look forward to future chapters and hopefully future stories.

p.s. dopamine is released by the sunstantia nigra or the ventral tegmental area of the brain

Obviously I am not done with this story yet but I liked it so much I couldn't wait until I was done to review. This is unbelievably good. Ridiculously good, to almost the same standard as Fleming good. Better than a lot of the other stories on this website. The writing style is exciting and visually expressive and the dialogue witty and engaging. I am thoroughly enjoying the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. I really have to say that reading an excellent fanfic really makes my day, and you have made my day. Thanks!

Wow you're story's pretty good, I bet your using the Connery Bond era as the format of your story, I can't wait to read more.

As your first reviewer, I must tell you that this story has promise. You should write a sequel, this is better than most of the stuff here.