AH! i keep reading this chap every day and the cliff hanger is driving me crazy!

Uh. I hate you for cutting off the chapter there. But I love you for how good this story is. Please keep writing!

This is probably old news to you... But I really felt the story has gone downhill after the Pain fight. Something's been missing and by this chapter, I really feel disconnected from the characters altogether.

buena historia

First off your king of all grammar Nazis missed a few lol.

Personally I liked this chapter, Naruto's thoughts were brilliant, truly hilarious especially:

"Winner! Naruto called, ecstatic that they were finally getting somewhere. And now you have to admit that youki exists. Admit it, infidel, admit it".

I laughed so hard I really did.

And punching women in the ovaries? Really? Lol

I thought it was Danzo who took Naruto? Maybe it's just been a while since I read the other chapter, hmm, dunno.

Well looking forward to the next chapter, and can you please for the mother of god read my story and review? Fuckers are only giving me story alerts and favourites, I have got two reviews for my rather awesome chapter fucking TWO!

This story had so much potential! You started chipping away from it by putting allusions to our culture, stupid little things like "house loan", back then they didn't work on credit! The fisher cat is only native to North America, now how do you supposed it found it way to the narutoverse. Also statements like "jesus naruto" or "for christ sake" definitely don't fit the culture, being polytheistic and all!

This story is simple great. There arent many stories like this one around, so good job i like it very much.

One more thing can anyone tell me how to get beta reader.I know i need to go to browse for beta, but what next.Do i chose some writer there and send him mesage asking him to beta my stories.I am not sure, so please help me.
You can post your's answer here or send me a mesage.

I just couldn't get into the fic, and I can't quite tell you why. The spelling of a couple names (Pein vs Pain) put me off, but in the end I guess I'm really not interested in the premise -- Naruto gets random girl pregnant and has to be a daddy. It's a more emotionally engaging story than I'm used to on ffnet, but my problem with it was it didn't engage positive emotions. I don't read for pleasure to be depressed.

This is great, but I must admit, the last two chapters were pretty maddening >.< I also don't like Naruto being paired with Sakura, even if it is minor. Personally, I would like no pairings, but you've already written it, and I probably wouldn't change your mind much anyways. I'm just going to say that I would like if it the romance went to a minimum? That's my vote. Anyways, this is great, and you should keep on writing!

what..? how did Naruto brush Kensha's death off so easily?

Walk softly and carry a big stick, you will go far.

Strange story for those who care. i have a one eyed black cat named jack. now his name is one-eyed jack after the playing card. nice chap

I like this story for some odd reason. I shall read on!

I can't get enough of this - the plot, the characters, it's amazing! Please update soon.

It was a good chapter, better with it than without. Naruto's Monologue was very amusing. Hope you feel better and update soon