 TheBroccoliMustDie 2009-05-12 . chapter 6I was kinda neglecting the reviews a bit 'cause I was so eager to find out what happens, but, y'know...if reviews make you HAPPY...
I actually didn't really know much about BLoSC before I started reading Both Syllables, so I researched it just so I could read the BLoSC parts. I'm glad I did. They're awesome. And Kila's great. I love all the referencing she does, especially the one about mudkips. xD |
 Gurz 2008-12-30 . chapter 4Fop Doppler's inflatable station! Priceless. |
 Liani Risate 2008-12-17 . chapter 10And Zurg being a little green thing inside a metal suit reminded me of Skulker in Danny Phantom. The idea is really cool though, and once again, it ties everything together perfectly. |
 Liani Risate 2008-12-17 . chapter 11This was really good! It tied everything together and now it all makes sense. This happened before Rules, are you going to do the sequel for Rules next? I can't wait! |
 Aleine Skyfire 2008-12-17 . chapter 11My favorite scene is XR at Commander Nebula's grave - so sweet and sad!
Fop Doppler the new Commander? Makes sense, but boy, is this gonna be interesting!! =D
Zurg a LITTLE guy in a suit, though? Mm, just don't sound right. Kinda funny, though.
Overall, great job! |
 Darkon Shadows 2008-12-17 . chapter 9Nokrad: ON ENO ENOLA! Dlouc ouy pleh su Ris? (it was said in a ghostly voice, taking the form of a cloud of mist)
Sir: I'm working on reviving you guy's, you just had to blow yourselves halfway into the netherworld for the millionth time.
Trio: At least I don't have that same creepy backwards syndrome when I haunt people dude. (Said a miffed demonic ghost penguin, crossing his arms)
Sir: This reminds me of the time XR or A-Tyr haunted his friends to put his batteries back in to him, which kind of proves he has spirit.
Nokrad: Lliw ouy yrruh ti pu!
Sir: It's going to take a while for you to revive Darkon as there was still some of you left to regenerate yourself totally, but I have to reincarnate Trio again.
Trio: I guess I'm stuck doing training montages for three weeks, why can't I only be partially dead like Darkon dude.
Sir: Surprisingly enough Darkon is resilient to heavy concussive and explosive based attacks, which he mostly seems to generate himself.
Trio: I guess our boss has some talent dude.
Nokrad: On gniddik. I evah yrev layol snoinim!
Sir: Darkon if you'd stay quite you'd regenerate faster. (The cloud of mist looked vaguely sad about having to be quiet.)
Trio: For some reason I think our reviews go largely ignored because they aren't really that relative to the story like how the plot is kind of sad in some cases.
Nokrad: ym efil si das.
Sir: Well your initials do spell SAD backwards.
Trio: Given the situation I'd think he'd rather not talk about it, also it looks like Tak has a agenda with Zerg. (A loud screetching noise is heard as a group of Hydralisk burst through the wall followed by a rush of zerglings)
Sir: Oh, now we're doing Starcraft cameos. (He said blandly)
Nokrad: weiver dne. (The hydralisk started spitting poison spines at Sir as he is the only one with a mostly physical body at the moment) |
 Maran Zelde 2008-12-16 . chapter 1I've seen four episodes of Star Command, and I'm trying to give it a chance, but it's a little too cheesy for me. And I still enjoy watching Ducktales, so it says a lot when I think a show is too cheesy. But I quickly decided Zurg is my favorite character. He's a supervillain in a jetpowered dress, how awesome is that? And he has the funniest lines.
Still, I'll try to keep reading this story. I like Kila. She's one of Jumba's experiments, right? |
 xLovelyWonderx 2008-12-16 . chapter 9I'm sorry I haven't reviewed. This is a really good fic. The latest chapter made me sad at the end with XR visiting Nebula's grave. Hope you update soon. |
 ngrey651 2008-12-16 . chapter 9Oh...XR by his father's tombstone. Heartbreaking.
It's typical, you know. When somebody loses a loved one, they go straight into the arms of somebody they think of as a lover or a girlfriend or a boyfriend. It may seem 'cheap' but in reality that person who's waiting, arms outstretched, can be one of the few people who can provide ANY comfort at all. |
 Liani Risate 2008-12-16 . chapter 8Tak is awesome! Glad you brought her in. |
 lurkerlaine 2008-12-16 . chapter 8I'm really starting to get into this Both Syllables Universe. |
 ngrey651 2008-12-15 . chapter 7Oh dear. Poor XL, stuffed into a closet...and XR. JUST when it looks like he's going to finally get revenge...
It's nice to see XR standing up for himself against his brother. And that exchange between him and Kila reminded me of nervous conversations I used to have with girls I'd fallen in love with...BEFORE I told them I loved them. :) |
 Liani Risate 2008-12-11 . chapter 6Yay! So is this going to be the sequel to Rules or is there going to be another story altogether? |
 Chaos of the asylum 2008-12-08 . chapter 5Oh excellent I have a feeling that this story will happen over the course of the other one. XD perhaps by the time XR, Kila and, KL get back Zim, and MALIK would just arrive at star command...Hmm I hope they last NOS-4-A2.
Please update soon...Which seems dumb to say seeing as you update Rules once a day. |
 Chaos of the asylum 2008-12-08 . chapter 4AH!
XD
I GETS IT NOW! XD It was Zim who XR saw in the ship and that's when MALIK was taken IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW!! XD
AHAHAHAHAHAH!
Everything's happening at the same time XD. |