This is very...dark. And also very sad. Extremely well written though. It's a solid piece, and I enjoyed reading it.

Wow, wonderful ending.

-Sayuri

Details are incredible. The ending wraps it up beautifully. Thanks for an awesome fic!

Why this story does not have more reviews i'm not sure. i love your writing style- so poetic and flowing- and i loved this first chapter too. it's just a little snippet but it leaves a lot of mystery. very interesting about the hole thing. anyways, update soo please! am looking forward to this story :]

So nice to see you posting again! I enjoyed the mood of this piece and think it's very fitting that Ichigo's body and soul would know he was becoming a hollow, even if his mind didn't.

Just so you know, the first line of this piece is from your new TB fic. Cut and Paste error? And 'no no no' didn't get italicized correctly.