A gorgeous poem, with a slightly Gothic feeling to it. I especially loved the way you mixed and matched the two povs.

AHH! Thank you for telling me about this; it was awesome! It was so powerful, so deep, and very much like lyrics to a twisted song. It made me wish I could write poems like that! Infact, I think you just gave me some inspiration. I think this poem was amazing. It described their relationship perfectly, and I think no ther words could describe it as well. This part was my fave:
The cold of a thousand snowstorms,
The heat of a thousand suns,
The joy, the hate, the shared sorrow,
All collide, all become one.
You went back and forth between the two! That made me smile. You are very talented. Excellent work! Another fave.