way cool you have got to write more soon!

Woo Hoo! Chapter 2!

This story is exiting, great, different, and fun to read. :)

But seriously that can't be all! Please tell me there is more... and more...

I liked that Chapter very much. But is that the end?

I like the first chapter. Very much.

Darn it, write MORE of this!

that was great! please write more!

oohhh steamy!

i really liked this one! it was shippy... even though that doesn't make sense cuz this aint txf... but... it was really good! you used very good detail and stuff! weeeeee!

Allyson Riggs

I LURVED IT TAWNIE! I mean loved it... err.. yeah.. hehe

No I thought it was really good! Too bad I don't know who frank Donovan or Alex or Jake really are, but it was really good! I got one of those mental picture thingies when i was reading it which is always a good sign that the story is well written. Well off i go, to read another one of your fics! Tata!

-Allyson.. not a 70 year old man... grrrrrr...

Hmm... intriqueing... Is Alex going to be pissed that he was watching her, or secretly pleased. LOL... good stuff...

Is there more? There HAS to be more! What a tease! I liked it...heeheehee...she laughed, heeheehee...I thought that was CLASSIC. HAHA. You HAVE you describe the look on his face when she laughs in the next chapter. HAHA! WOOHOO!

Good stuff! Very funny, and I think Alex's reactions are perfect!

This is really good! I wonder how Donovan will react to her laughing! And i cant wait to watch tomorrow nights episode lol just thought I'd add that!

Wow! You read my mind. I want them to get together too. Guess I'm not alone in the world. Great fic! And yummy Donovan.

This is a good start what's coming next? I don't really see Donovan getting involved with anyone on the team, but you are writing a good story about him and Alex. Please continue it.

Great! I do hope you'll write more? :)