This story made me smile slightly in the end. What a sweet story between father and daughter about their relationship. Yeah, neither of them would last a day without each other and this story really lets them both know that. Mostly I loved the dialogue. It was so in character and so well done that it almost did not even seem like a fan fiction, instead like you were completely pro at writing this stuff. I really enjoyed this story, and I could actually hear Sheriff Jack Carter saying everything.

Great addition to the episode! You have the voices perfect and I really enjoyed the scene of Carter comforting Zoe. Overall, very nice!

ab :-D I agree, I dont like the ships either - but I love the relationship between Zoe and her dad. Great fic, well written :-)
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Nice job! Seemed more like Zoe whump than Carter! Great job with Carter's voice though. I could see his actions through your words! Keep it up!

Love the story. It's definitely now one of my favorite Eureka stories. Keep writing. Please.

Oh, dear writer, when I read your little note at the top, I was excited. Very excited. For you see, I, too, am not for a ship like most of the fics, and am a whump fan, and then there's the summary...

This was a treat. A fun missing scene that had one of my favorite relationships of the show in it. You've got Carter acting so much like a dad...I wish we had that more.

Please write more fics for this fandom? I'll even go finish the one I was working on, if that'll help get you writing!