Oh my goodness! This was beautiful! I just started reading NUMB3RS fanfic tonight, and this made me so happy! I love Charlie and Amita, and I think this was a really well-done portrayal of them. Nice work! :)

i really liked this. You have the two down pat:) the funny thing is I literally just finished watching this ep. so it was great to see a continuation of it

Aw, I really loved that story, great job!

Nicely done. I thought the characters were spot on perfect with the tv show and I like how you used the scene in Waste Not to set this up. It's so like them to use an objective approach, isn't it?